I know you tried hard to make this touching, but there's one thing that doesn't work - TK's at least 11 or 12 when you've set this and that's a little old to be carried. It makes it little bit wierd.

Also, 'nii-chan' is a close, informal term for an OLDER brother, not a younger one.

Really cute, poor Yama so tired and lonely... anyway I hate that woman, how could she abandon her little Yamato...but it is really good, congratulations!

That was beautiful.

Love it _

Again, this is awesome.

This has to be the cutest story I have ever read! Yamato and Takeru are my two favorite characters! Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please write some more stories involving these two! And their parents!

Everybody's well characterized (poor Yamato. Inheriting angst and stress from *both* parents..), and exhausted TK and Yama are just too adorable...

One small quibble, though..."'nii-chan/san" is Japanese for older brother. If Yama or Jun are talking to their little brothers they'd use *otouto*...or just names, Takeru or Daisuke...

the fact that i'm writing a review at all can be taken as a sign that I really like this fic. Great writing.

Aww...how utterly ADORABLE! I can just see Yamato and Takeru asleep on the couch. Wai! Wai!

Waffy, I loved it. Well done and well written.

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. ) An incredible piece, digging into the mind and soul of a very unnoticed character in the Digimon fandom. Not that I blame people; the parents aren't as important as the Digidestined kids, after all, but I like to think that since TK & Matt's parents have been given names, they must have some more importance to the plot and the grand scheme of things than just character setup for TK & Matt because of their divorce. ) A well-written masterpiece; and I liked the insertion of Matt's appearence and Malcolm Ishida's, however short they may be. One thing odd about those two parents - notice how they still talk to each other politely, like they're distant friends? Aren't divorcees supposed to be ice-cold at each other? *raise eyebrow* Maybe there's still something of the old spark left...

Just an idea. .;;

Anyhow, great writing!

Hauntress-chan

This was a beautiful fic! I loved it. It was nice how you finaly paid some attention to Natsuko in such a nice way, she's always getting ignored. And I love parent fics. Or sister fics if it involves Jun. It's nice to get the perspective if it's from someone other than a digidestened every once in a while.

Oh my god . . . I loved that it was so good. The touches of character details were excellent. Very, very well done.

cute and cuddly

That was pretty good and I liked it.

I enjoyed this immensely- it's nicely-written, and it's interesting to see just a day at the Takaishi/Ishida homes. :3 Though the families are so frequently mentioned in fanfics, it's rare to just get to see them together with each other like this...I liked it a lot. _