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Wobbly
2006-03-16 . chapter 1
I've read this before ;)
Favorite line: I debate banging my head against my front door, but decide against it, knowing how silly that must look. Then again, I must look silly now, too, standing in front of my door, gaping up at him.
I love this story..
pealee
2006-01-22 . chapter 1
I know you said this was finished but it would be awesome if you wrote more. Like the next time she asks for him to come up for coffee. But if you do leave it as is it was great. I love how you described what Samantha was feeling. You did the tension just right. Again great job and if you do I'd love to read more:)
LifesVictory
2006-01-22 . chapter 1
I enjoyed this very much because a lot of the way the situation is set up is your style and not just the format of something that would be on the show. So kudos to you times 100 for such a great flair. However, Sam seems to act a little young for her age, but then again love does funny things to people, so I guess it's not a problem. Nice job, anyway. :)
serataja
2006-01-21 . chapter 1
Nice, nice, nice! So very nice! Almost screams for a sequel, doesn't it?
jjbird
2006-01-20 . chapter 1
That was just lovely. I liked the way you turned it around with the coffee offer. I liked the line about the chaste kiss, and the snowflakes. Please, honour us with more!
JackofSpade
2006-01-20 . chapter 1
Favorite Line: “Night, Sam.” He whispers and I suddenly can’t imagine him calling me any other name ever again.

Well done! I really liked the nervous babbling on her doorstep. Oh! and the "not tonight" line was also very well worked.
Mariel3
2006-01-20 . chapter 1
This was neat. I really like that he said 'Not tonight." It made things much more interesting. Very nice. Thanks for posting!
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