... Oh my... Wow... Awesome job.
-D101

ha. im a saint now :p. that was cool. keep up the good work. :)

Extremly well written, at first I wasn't sure if I would like it but you blew me away. You are an excellent author, and if this was written a long time ago you must be amazing now. Great job!

Heh im a saiint wii...so i kinda expected for her to do somethin outrageous and save him and not die and then for them to realise theyre in love...ah

okay. weird i dont get hermione punhishmetbut this was really sad

You not make it a one shot thing. Make it longer then that. It's intreseting. I liked it alot. Please write more please?

Aw c'mon write more ya bum! That was too good to be a oneshot.

You pretty much wrote down the correct way to mark, which is by wand. The correct spell for marking is Morsmorde, I think. I'm pretty sure it is. Good job on the, um, freakiness. I'm now thoroughly disturbed.

Dark. Good writing, though.

please please please continue! i really want to find out what happens next! please? don't quit half-way through the story like a lot of stories i read. be the one to finish. it's good and i wanna know what happens. please?

Wow...this was just positively horrific. (in a good topic way) Very well written. You've shown Voldemort's character excellently. That fragment of a soul has no mercy for anyone. I do feel dreadfully sorry for our heroes though. I guess good doesn't win all the time. Nice job. In regards to the dark mark, I think you created a very unique way of becoming marked. Lol.

u r one STRANG person

Good anti-fluff. I liked your characterizations, and the gifts were fairly clever. However, after HBP, watching Ginny suffer seems like a better punishment for Harry than for Ron.

The story is very well written and most of all realistic!
Neverless, I don´t think I have to tell you, that I hate the end! What they did to harry is one thing. He could find a way out later on, but with ginny and malfoy it´s permanent and they are lost, even if the trio would find a way out!

This is really good.
It's sad too though.
But I think the 'gift' ideas were really clever.
Now I only wish there was another chapter! (I know there won't be one, I'm just saying)