This is a very welcome piece as it is probably the most original in the library of fanfiction(if it could even be called that with some of the work in here). Written well! Hope to see a new chapter soon(er) or right now? Ok maybe not well hurry up... its been a while.

hi...nice storyline...like it...wonder what will happen next...hopefully that yuuhi is already over aya...anyway gtg...ja ne..

more!more!more!

No!No!No!It's just not enough! Pls. continue!

Write more, curse you.

umm..wheres the rest? there is no link to another chapter.. adn you just left us hanging! AHHHH!

PLEASE WRITE MORE! I LOVE THIS THING! WOOHOOOOO GO YUUHI!

finish your story plszzzzz!i want to know what happens next! plszzzz!wirte the next chapter very soon!i've been waiting for months now!

C-O-N-T-I-N-U-E

wow! write more. i wanna know what happens!

Wai! I loved it! :) Definitely continue with it! I'm looking forward to the next part!

Weeeeel..yes..keep going. I'll only make this note, tho. I like how you depicted Yuuhi; a guy trying to get on with his life. Just remember the relations that Aya had with Yuuhi. for some parts of the manga, she did seem like she was going to love him. and at other parts, she was obsessing over touya ( _

Oh wow. I've been looking for something like this. Ayashi no Ceres is absolutely a kickass anime. I never understood why they put Aya with Touya... I hate that guy. Anyway. More! 7 of 10

Although I don't have a freaking clue who any of these people are and have actually never heard of the anime, I figured you'd kill me if I didn't put in a word or two, Asa. Here's the two: OOOH! NIFTYNESS! There ya have it, folks.

Wow! I love the story! Its amazing! I wish I could write half as good as this! Really good story, really good plot, I like the characters too _ I can't wait until you write more!