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| Isabelle LH 2008-01-12 ch 6,  | abuseAbout time this was updated :) well what can I say, the new chapter is as great as the rest of them. I love the plot you have got here, far different than the other stories on here I've read, well done. I can't really think about anything that could be improvd ... I just look forward to reading some more! ~ Jess |
| Tilly Tah Tah 2007-06-22 ch 4, anon. | abuseI must admit I was a bit sceptic in the beginning of the story, mostly cause I was I was afraid it would be one of those "let's thorw in mu character in the same story line as before and not make anything up myself", but I really like this. LOVE stephen and of course the lovely Patrick ;) Try be more detailed though, make me really read their feelings ^^ Great job! And please update^^ |
| Scottishgal12 2007-06-19 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter. Your story is excellent. Cant wait to read more!! |
| Scottishgal12 2007-02-27 ch 3, | abuseI like your story a lot,looking forward to reading more. |
| CelticWater 2007-01-31 ch 2, | abuseLMAO, oh boy, I got a real laugh outta seeing that you hadn't updated for 356 days! But I wonder why--it's a great story line, and I find it extremely historically accurate. I burst into an uncontrollable grin when I read: “The Almighty says she’s a lucky girl.” One name shot through my mind: Stephen!! WOOT! Please update before next year ;) Cheers! --CelticWater |
| Jolena 2006-09-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is probably the best Braveheart story on FFNet (it baffles me how such a famous movie could generate so little fanfic interest) and I wish you would continue. I read your earlier Braveheart fic and while it's very pleasant, I can see that you've definitely grown as a writer (it flows more smoothly and the language is more appropriate historically) and truth to tell, I like the premise of this story more. Your descriptions flow very well and your dialogue is appropriate for the time period. You have no idea how seemingly difficult it is for people to get that right in historical fics. I'm glad you didn't have her run away just yet, and I'm honestly curious as to where you were planning on taking this. On the other hand, you haven't updated in over half a year. I checked your profile and your updates for your other stories are rather spaced apart, but it doesn't seem like you've abandoned them yet. That's kind of comforting. In any case, I hope you return to this soon. Aris is a very promising character, especially because she seems rather normal with ordinary human foibles and weaknesses. And stories with Robert the Bruce are always interesting to read; the guy doesn't get enough attention. I'm adding this to my Story Alert list. Hope you decide to continue this someday! |
| Sylvan Sonora 2006-06-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is fantastic...It's so nice to read a piece of work from someone who seems to really know the time period. :) Please write more soon. I love your work. |
| marissa 2006-04-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked it. Your story has potential.The plot is realistic enough for the time period,and the word flow moves at a steady pace.Leaving out some of the minute details would make it even better.Good luck on future chapters. |
| Sea Fire 2006-03-27 ch 1, | abuseMore, more, MORE! |