"She couldn’t see the frustrated look on his face nor the hint of longing in his eyes, just the cold hardness of his back.

Not twelve hours later, he became another woman’s knight."

Hands down the best freaking oneshot Seifer and Quistis piece. My all time favorite. I LOVE IT! :") Hope to read more of your work.

Wonderful! Wow! I really wish that was what happened in the Secret Area! Go Quistis and Seifer!!

hey, this is actually good! for a one-shot, it is beautiful and profound in its simplicity. i wish you would write more quifer fanfics as beautiful as this, only that they ain't one-shots no more :D good work and more power!

Good work on this. Nice and subtle, with just enough detail to be vague. So I think anyway. Nice job.

wild but beautiful. Fiery with passion. ah, just what I expected from both seifer and quisty. you did a good job. you had good choice of words. keep writing, please.

That was good. :D

You mention you were not trying to show that they love each other in this story and I think you protrayed that very well. I didn't see the love, but I could see that there were some feelings there. Awesome story.

AwesomeO.

I'm a huge fan of Seifer x Quistis fanfics (as you can tell by my stories 'Bathwater' and 'Alone in a Crowded Room', check them out if you can!!) and I'm now a huge fan of your story!! It was written beautifully and I liked how you portrayed their emotions and thoughts. Great job!

A bit late, but I'm reviewing anyway. XP

I loved it.

"For a second, she wondered if she fell in love with the wrong man. Should it have been the man with the cocky grin and not the silent soldier that she should have fallen for?" That was my favourite line, it just... just got to me for whatever reason.

I hope you write more QuistisxSeifer. :)

i liked it. very cool way of describing everything!

whoah! that was kickass! That scenario would've really worked. It makes a lot of sense, considering their characters. Whoa, you're awesome. Great fic. I loved it. Your style's so cool. I haven't read good quifers in a while. Hahhaa. thank you.

I like this quite a bit. The kiss was vague, but that was what you were going for, and I thought it worked well.

I loved your story, very thought provoking.

Loved it

Loved it- especially the ending! "Not twelve hours later, he became another woman's knight."

Lovely!