Reviews for As The World Around Me Falls

Reviews For: As The World Around Me Falls

Emilie Rose 2008-04-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseBravo! I love Hassan. Great concept. You should definately write more.
Amethyst Asheryn 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseInteresting. The only thing I didn't really like is that I'd like to see more of her emotion. I mean, seeing her friends like that's gotta freak her a little. Do her thoughts start racing? Does she go cold, or hot all over, or does she feel like the bottom's dropped out of her stomach? Doesn't she at least ask hassan what's wrong, why he looks that way? That's pretty much the only thing I had to pick at. Except that this ended kinda abruptly... Is it to be continued or is it just a oneshot? From the summary I'd guess it's to be continued, but that's just a guess. All in all, pretty good, but I think maybe you could expand on her emotions a bit, y'know? Lon
Bunny Bubble 2007-05-08 ch 1,	abusex] I had to read this book for English, and I was wondering about this scene. Are you going to continue this? It sounds great so far :]
GrandDuchessSasha 2007-02-03 ch 1,	abuseThis is very good. I adore this book, and I like this. Continue!!
aRiia 2007-01-12 ch 1,	abusei really like your story so far. i read the book about a year ago and reread it a week ago. the book was very well written as is your fanfic. please update soon. i'm looking forward to reading more
Catchy Pen Name 2006-07-02 ch 1,	abuseWo, The Kite Runner! Great book, I'm glad there's a category now. =) Nice job, and nice story.
Mystic Angel 2006-06-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseI loved the book The Kite Runner, I think it is great that you are writing about it. Your story sounds good so far.
violetjewelz 2006-03-29 ch 1,	abuseI really like this fanfic and I see that you haven't updated since the end of January and so I'm assuming that either you have given up with the story or you are just taking a while to update and although I like quick updates, I much prefer the latter scenario because that means I will see more from this story--even if it will take awhile. Please, please continue this fanfiction. It's very good adn well-written, as well, and plus it's the ONLY Kite Runner fanfic and so it's not like I can get my kicks reading other ones as I wait for you to update as I do with other books and movies and such. Anyways, thanks for writing such a wonderful beginning to a promising story. Update soon, please! -- violetjewelz
Mrs Turtle 2006-03-04 ch 1,	abuseWhoa, great story. Congradulations on being the first under a new category!
mookiepookie 2006-02-24 ch 1,	abusehmm... intreating
Nadiabb786 2006-01-30 ch 1,	abuseTo tell you the truth... I was a little hesitant to read your fic, just because I am SOO in love with the book. I don't want the story changed around in my head. I don't know if that makes sense. I was eventually tempted. Props on keeping your fic relevant to the story. It is well written. I really appreciate that. You have no idea.
hezziebob182 2006-01-30 ch 1,	abuseNice start. I've just finished the book and it's great to see some fanfic for it :D
OtherwiseKnownAsOli 2006-01-24 ch 1,	abuseNice start! I just finished reading this book about a week ago... it was really sad.. but good
Harley 2006-01-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat start on your fic! I haven't finished the book yet, but I am a big fan of it, and I love the way you've started writing this story. Please continue soon!

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