Good job!

Hi! First I want to thank you for writing this story, it's really fun! However, I must note somethings that you're getting wrong (or so I think). First is the fact that Gosunkugi is a good magician, that never happened, his spells never worked and the only one was the paper dolls that some man sold him, however I take it that it's a change in this world, right? Now, there is the fact that Gosunkugi handled Ryouga his umbrella... simply impossible.That umbrella weights too much, in both anima and Manga not even Akane can lift it. About Ryouga I can see him denying so much the new reality in front of him, but not really wanting Akane to divorce, Since he has such a sad life he is used to losing things, and I think that even winning he would give up once he sees that Akane really married by her will.
Now about Ranma's abilities I don't think you should make him stronger that Ryouga. Ranma's main attacks were mostly learned thanks to him, he helped him with the Hiryu Shoten Ha and Ranma learned his ki attack from Ryouga's Roaring Lion bullet. Then since Mousse has been his only rival I think Ranma is not used to fight someone with so much endurance like Ryouga. It's a known fact that Ryouga's rivality with Ranma helped the later to become better by leaps, with Ryouga he had to relay in speed to win so he trained to increase it (the bee's training). Anyway, thing is that I think that in case Ranma won it would be a close call, since by definition the original Ranma would be way stronger.

Why wouldn't ryoga wish to get rid of his curse or fix his sense of direction

To the anon Mr. T.

I've finally broken my silence to address your remark, because I think I need to. Well, if you follow the character closely, your seen (mostly in the anime), Ryoga IS an idiot with a violent streak! He's also a tragic hero. In this story, I have Ryoga mainly out of character for a reason, because he's dealing with an unreal situation. Anyone in that situation would undergo a lot of mental stress and say and do crazy things. Just wait for the next chapter, things will revert back to normal. This is a story I wanted to write, and I how people are enjoying it despite the "out of characterness".

Ryouga is impossibly out of character. He used to be a tragic hero figure and you've turned him into some idiot with a violent streak.

What might comes out of this fight?
How well will Ranmas martial arts skills be improved?
Who's going to win?

Three questions I want to be answerd as fast as possible. ;-)

Your story is quite an interesting piece of work. To make Ryoga a stranger to everyone with no one to rely on but Gosunkugi, the self-proclaimed magican. A weird twist of fate but for sure a great idea.
Mostly I love the fact to see a Ryoga-vs.-everyone-scenario. To see the eternal wanderer truly lost, not just in place but also in time, is like I've said before a very good and interesting idea.

Bye, Deepdream.

Well, you certainly bring in a host of mostly ignored characters xD Yay for Gosunkugi!

o.o; It's interesting how much could happen just because you don't meet someone in life... Who'd thought that Ryouga could be so influencial xD;;

Good story ^^ Just watch the tenses you write in... This is turning out to be an interesting ficlet! =D

Well... I'm hooked.

^^ I'm excited to see where you'll take this story and plot... Memories are always something fun to mess with xD

Your writing is cute; the only thing I would critique is be a little more descriptive with the character's actions as they're talking. ^^ But other than that, I think this story is great! I'll scurry off to read the next chapter now!

- Chibi

Hm ... Ryoga seems to be a tad weecy lil' bit OOC (serious-ness), but the idea and plot that the story is based upon carries it along well. Wonder what'll happen next ...

I don't understand what Gosenkugi is going on about with Ryoga being "a lost soul in the fabric of time". It seems more like he was simply moved to a parallel timeline where he never met Ranma and Genma died before the cat fist.

interesting story, hope to read more soon!

Good, good! Don't stop!

Good story so far. I haven't read many stories quite like this one. Keep up the good work! Ja!

Ryouga really has problems with facing reality...and he's so mean to Gosunkugi. Makes me want to pick him up with my physics gun from Gary's Mod and lock him in an embarrasing position...

Secret of my life?? Woops I had thought you said secret life. I had thought you had Ranma running off being female without anyone knowing. That would have been funny. I just miss read though lol^^