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Darkened Ruby
2006-08-13
ch 2,
abuseYOU MUST UPDATE! PWEASE -SOBS- YOU HAVE TOO!
KatAngelQueen
2006-06-27
ch 2,
abuseFantastic! Update please. But yea, i did notice the spelling but who cares with a story like this!
Memoamo
2006-06-25
ch 2,
abuseYay an update! I can't wait to see which direction you're goning to take this story. I hope you put the next chapter up as soon as you can.
EmmaMary
2006-06-01
ch 1,
abusebeautifully written
Memoamo
2006-05-06
ch 1,
abuseYour story sounds interesting. I hope you continue with it.
EvilEatingSanta
2006-02-26
ch 1,
abuseAw. I like...NEVER read Maureen/Mark stuff. Honestly, never. But this one was like "read me" and I was like "kay" and so I did and I'm glad I did!

I love the Maureen POV. It's so well done, and, whenever I write Maureen in my story I have so much fun writing her, so it's even more interesting to get inside of her head and see what she's thinking. Especially in this story how she's not her usual outrageous self, since she's distraught. Great job!

Marky! He's so adorable. I love how he resisted at first, but then gave in. Poor thing. :(

Only complaint: TOO SHORT! I wanna read more! ^__^

Great job!

-Carrie-
Everme
2006-01-28
ch 1,
abuseYay! A Mark/Maureen romance! it's really good. keep going.
Serendipity Kat
2006-01-23
ch 1,
abusei hope you continue. ^_^
WingdFairy90
2006-01-21
ch 1,
abuseThis is good. Are you going to continue? I think you should.

The story line has been done before, but each story I read with same topic is different and each author brings in something new to the characters. Even though it has been done before you shouldn't care and be creative. You seem like a good writer... I like it.

-Mel
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