i'm really interested in seeing where this goes.

Uhm...

I'm so confused. Perhaps it's because I don't know who The Supreme One is...

This is so SO DARK! But, I'm afraid I'm just too confused to appreciate the angst. I mean, the temporal thing is confusing enough, but I just can't keep track. There's one part where it sounds like Kim is looking at "the red-head".

Sorry my review is such a downer. But I don't get it. Wanna try again, longer?

slightly confusing but really cool i love the whole mind f*ck of time travel lol btw what does the title mean?

You need to learn to put in dividers of some kind for your scene changes...it makes it hard to read if you're constantly changing scenes and not giving any visual conformation that you are.

Keep writing, my friend, Keep writing.