Wow, you just do so well in making your story's Bebedora have such realistic thoughts to the one in the game. I can definetly see her having this kind of confusion if she wasn't sure what love was.

I think she does know a little bit about it though, because she does tease Delma when she's jealous. She didn't seem affected at all when Camellia said that she sounded like a little girl in love though, so that might hint that she doesn't know.

~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)

Wow. That story just blew me away. I mean, I don't usally read peoms or anything that look's like it, but thus caught my eye and just had to read it. I thought it was very cute and cool at the same time. You are very gifted at talking like Bebedora as well as Maru. You have the ability to even make your own game. If you do plan own making a game, I have few ideas. Well then, see you later and good luck.

Oh, wow. This was... amazing. I started reading this and hated the format, but it just clicked after a while, as the way that Bebedora thinks and speaks. Loved it.

Wow. This is cute. I always thought of Maru and Bebedora but never really let my imagination ride on it.

Great work. =D

I liked it. It's really good. Too bad it's nly a one shot.

AW HOW CUTE

There are very few Arc the Lad fanfics out there, and I was pleasantly suprised to find one about Bebedora (she is easily one of my favorite characters in that game). Excellent story, superb writing, and you kept to Bebedora's character perfectly. This is goin' to my Favorites list.

*sque!* This is so cute and so... so perfect! You rule, xchaosx!

WOW. This is the first Ark the Lad fic I've read and I gotta say it was pretty good. Really cute and not only has Bebedora become one of my favorite RPG characters of all time, but Bebedora and Maru are one of my favorite pairings. This fic is great!

I thought it was cute, and you kept Bebedora in character. Well done!

You did a wonderful job making this fic very true to Bebedora. I loved it.

Aw that was really sweet! ^^ Thanks for the story!

oh cute heh I totally support Bebedora and Maru, but could you please write a Lilia and Darc fic pleace I would really appriciate it.