Way to rip off the back of the game, buddy. I don't know if it is from the back but it is short enough to be.

Very nice, J, despite whoring up some of my stuff. XD S'all good, tho. I steal stuff too.

Ya know this story is looking awfully familiar, this looks simliar to another KOTOR retelling I'm reading only that is done with LSM male instead of F. Still an excellant job, keep it up.

Jolly good!
It's fun to read the game in story format, and I really do think you have a gift for words. I enjoy reading the characters' thoughts here. Lovely writing - keep it up!