Very good story, but I have a few difficulties with it.

1. All the extra lines and dashes.

2. I believe the fox's name was Giles (At least it is in Elecktrun's series of Narnia stories it is)

3. It made me cry.

This story i satsifying and a nice read. A few corrections to be suggested: you write in incomplete sentences quite often. I am not sure if it is intentional, but it leaves one hanging for the next part which never comes. Also, the spacing was a little bit annoying as it causes the reader to have to scroll down to keep reading the next line.

As for the fox: I'm not sure where I heard it, but I thought the fox's name was Reynard or something like that. However, in a brief review of the information on the internet, I cannot relocate that bit of info. ::shrugs::

Thank you for remembering the fox, though.

Sam

Interesting. Very short but good. You didn't even have to do much with it to make it a good little piece.

Though your chapter format is a little messed up, not sure if that was intentional to have those spaces between. If it is, that's cool, it worked :)

As for the fox...you know, it's funny I should read this, because I just finished writing chpt 15 of my Narnia, Edmund POV fan fic and Ed goes back to help the fox :)

Cool to see minds think alike.

Good job

Cool. Really cool. It is true, no one knows when Aslan went and un-stone-ified Fox...or how he knew about him...but he appears for the coronation anyway. Nice. Oh, and thanks for the review. The author for that fic actually told me to go to hell...I don't see what I did wrong...do you?

I loved the fox - especially in the film - so I really enjoyed this story. Please keep writing about him. He shows up a couple of times in the film but he must have had adventures in between times - finding people, spreading the word about Aslan's return etc (and did he make it to the coronation as well?...) Tell us all what happened!

I just read (and reviewed) to one of your parody stories. This is quite a change from those other stories. I really like your style of writing. Good grammar and structure. The tone and imagery are amazing-detailed, but not too much so (and not really sappy either :) ) Do you write anything besides fanfiction?

...beautiful :) really unexpected and insightful. well done

See, this is why you're on my favorite Aurthors List:)

'Twas a bit sappy, but it was the good kind of sappy.

And I think that after the movie, many people forgot about poor Mr. Fox.

Loved it:) ^_^

Forever praising your fics,

SharinganMaster

Good story. I'd wondered the same thing.

Oh, that was just lovely. I like to think that Aslan traveled all over Narnia before he left, restoring those who had been turned to stone; Badger and co., the fox and the butterfly, etc. I love your idea of having Edmund take Alan to the fox. It's very fitting, and the last line was particularly nice. Well done!

So sweet, I loved the fox even though I only saw him in two secens