Haha! I loved this! So sweet and funny :D

Lovd it!

Witty and humerous! :D

Oh garsh! That was awesome! Teehee! I don't even know which little parts to mention! I loved the "call for his mummy" bit, just awesome! And the Kamikaze Tobogganing? Genius! "Bonsai!" Makes me think of Sixteen Candles when the Donger attacks Jake. hehehe. And the kiddie's questions? *squee* oh boy! Wouldn't that be a sight to see? hehe I love the "Eh, actually my bum's numb." That was so good. Teehee! Okay, I'm gonna go read some of your other stuff. Bye now.

Caitlin

Very funny! _

Great Story!Loved it!I thought it was really cool and I just wanted to let you know that:D Sorry 'bout the short review though

I just spent the last while pouring over all your stories, after I stumbled onto this one. You're fantastic! I am loving the style of your writing and the inherent fun in all your stories! Well done. Yours is possibly the best, most under-reviewed writing I've read in a while.

Oh, I love this story, it is halarious! Please make it into a chapter story. Please!