I liked the first chapter 1 MUCH better than the second one, just sayin'. I think it would have been so much more interesting for you to go from there. After the first chapter I feel like Scarlett and Rhett became quite out of character.

it is good. i am not a good critic...lol

i just don't get it. you can't kiss someone back if they didn't kiss you first.

This was a good story, but I think that I liked where the un-edited version of chapter 1 was heading better. You moght work on character consistency, because it seems to come in spurts. Yet, very good story all the same. You should have continued.

You've really got Scarlett's character down! Rhett's too. I really like this story. All throughout Gone With The Wind, every time I watch it, I really want to give Scarlett one good slap across the face to make her wake up and see things as they really are. But, what else is fanfiction for but to re-write things the way we want them? Anyway, I like the story, update soon!

Hey, this is really good! Why have you stopped it - the computer still not working? I hope it will be soon alright and I am looking forward to your next update! By the way - if you go on, will you leave Melly alive? It is going to be important after they (if they) come back. And will Scarlett have the second baby? Actually, I don't mind any solution - just one thing: please, keep Scarlett in character as you did until now... (if she changes, O.K., but it will take a bit of time, I guess (-:).

Please, please, please update SOON!

I have to read more of this story! PLEASE post more soon!

This is a spectacular story! Please continue very soon!

Great chapter! Really interesting so far! Update soon!

Oh I love it! Love it! Love it! Beautiful beginning! Absolutely love the holding hands part. So romantic. But I don't like it when they're drunk either. Please update soon! I can't wait!

Hurry you updated. I can not wait for the next chapter. Have I mentioned to you how much I hate scarlett the only time she will get close to her husband is when she is drunk. She has the love of a man like Rhett and all she can think of is either her mills of a guy with a girls name. UGGH. Well please update soon. I really enjoy your writtings.

Yay! You updated! Now I need MORE! LOL~ No constructive criticism here, it rocked. Plain and simple.

great update :)

Excellent! I love it! PLEASE write more SOON!