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Reviews for: This Is My Goodbye
Bumpkin
2009-06-11 . chapter 1
I *like* this - I mean I really like it. :) And frankly I wouldn't mind seeing reactions to the letter from various ppl in the wiz-world if the muse ever grabs you that way. I think it could be fascinating to have a whole series of short little drabblesque reactions... what do you think?

Anyway, keep penning,
Marns
~pN
Sera dy Relandrant
2008-04-24 . chapter 1
Why then, do you come asking for me to lead you? That is just another dictatorship, another Cult of Personality. And I do not want it.

Cult of personality... yeah you've put it brilliantly here. The exact words, I mean really it was Voldie's charisma first and then his ruthlessness that pulled so many people over to his side (let's leave aside the pureblood, elitist views he expressed - I mean, a lot of the people in Hogwarts must have known that he couldn't have been TOTALLY pureblood, so why did they follow him at all? Must have been an awfully magnetic guy).

I am not infallible.

Oh I love you for saying that! In canon - the later books in particular - it does seem like Harry thinks he's a law unto himself. Seriously, Crucioing Carrow was uncalled for.

Absolutely brilliant fic - did he commit suicide or he did leave the country? It really is very lovely - so is your other fic "Ten Ways to Die".
lyon in the meadow
2008-02-23 . chapter 1
Very cool :D

Thing is, would the wizards know who Jesus was?

Unless he was a wizard...O.O

Anyway, that was good
Moonlit Dawn
2008-02-05 . chapter 1
Why is it that every time someone says 'no offense', what they say is offenseful?

But, beside that. I have to second-- or third, or whatever-- whoever said this was a powerful piece of fanficton. It was pretty good, and not really boring. (It was pretty short for my standards, ever read 10,0 word chapters?) It kept my attention, and since this is my reveiw, that's all that mattered.

Great one-shot!

Moonlit Dawn
Freedom Isn't Free
2007-07-27 . chapter 1
Very powerful. I usually try to give some constructive tips, and my tip here is that you take out just one of those titles...it gets exhausting to read so many, and it sounds like a stretch. Great job, though, this is quite good.
moonymonster
2007-04-16 . chapter 1
*grin* This reminds me of a fic I wrote for a far more obscure fandom, with the same sort of "I know you're going to read into this summary but I don't want to give further detail because it'll ruin the ending" summary...but cool. I liked the 'Your problems can rest on your own backs' line.

And I'm very tempted to haunt you on livejournal. I can do it, you know! *shakes fist*
rachel
2007-04-15 . chapter 1
uhh... kinda boring[no offense] its not the worst ive seen...
why dont u try some other kind of story
Kin Pandun
2007-01-18 . chapter 1
Fantastic. Perfect. Serves them right.

Thanks for writing,
Kin.
AlyshaNemesis
2006-01-21 . chapter 1
Damn...that was really good! Sad but great! I like it! That's how Harry must feel after all that...
I just wonder how he is planning to hide himself completely...he is not planning to kill himself, is he?
I'd really like to see how things will finally trun out... Are you planning on a sequel?
gleefulgardengnome
2006-01-21 . chapter 1
I quite like it. It's slightly overdramatic, but the insight is intense and interesting. Will there be more? I'd like to see an expansion on the idea.
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