*ponders* there's several thoughts that i could voice about this, but every one of them would seem either callous or wimpy.

hm... food for thought, this is,
brittney

This...this was highly disturbing...but it was so real. Excellent job!

Why is this unpopular? The story itself was amazing...And I feel strongly about bullying as well (because although I myself was never *physically* bullied like Artemis in this fic, I have been bullied...but then, surely most people have.) anyway, I did like this story (I won't say *enjoy* because that's the wrong word, but I did like it.)
Lon

Wow... Interesting fic. Quite sad and angsty, but it makes a point. A rather depressing point... Still. Awesome job! I liked Kimmy...

...wow. Good fic.

I thought it was depressing but it wasn't bad at all. It grabs attention. That's what everyone wants to do with their story is to draw people's attention.

That was really depressing. However, very true. Some parts were slighlty jumbled (at least to me) but overall, it was really good. It was powerful to say the least and it really makes a person think.

I find no fault. Excellent story, very moving. While I dry my tears, though, I'd like to tell you that I lied when I said 'no fault', and that St. Bartleby's is an all-boys school, so Kimmy is really out of place. But it's excellent, it feels real. Little has Artemis dealt with real-life high school, and your story makes a good point about what he has to face when Butler is not around, even if the end is very dramatic.

I love angsty. A bit of a sudden ending however, but good.
Write more...

So sad, but it does have a point. I guess that's all it needs in the end, a point; and it is well written.