good story so far, interested in where u're going with this.
if you havent got someone already, i can do some beta reading or whatsit, for your grammar, etc.

Hey! I really like your story!

If you like I can beta read your story :), my mother tongue is Spanish so I can help you with your grammar or other translation problems :)) my mail is:

e-mail me if you want me to beta read your fic :)

Im confused on some part of the story.. like why did ranma leave. who is the father of akane's son?(but i do hope it's ranma..), who 's nabiki's ex husband (kuno maybe?) and many more.

Im still sticking my eyes into this fic. Please update soon!

Wow...

I love this story. It's so detailed and comedic, I mean, Ranma Saotome in therapy? Hilarious...

Anyways, I love it and can't wait for the next chapter.

I realize my last review sounded like I was whining and that I didn't like the story. I want to say that is not the case, and that I really enjoy the story.

The writing is very good considering English is your second language. I'd offer to beta-read, but I'm pretty awful at spotting errors in text, and I'd probably just be wasting your time.

Keep up the good work.
- Matrias

Well, it's a potentially interesting fic, but you sure do take A LOT of time to talk about NOTHING! Speed up on the updates and actually use the chapters to try and get somewhere for a change.

Because frankly, I'm getting a little fed up with waiting for something to happen.

(I'll be a beta if you want! I'll e-mail you though, I guess.)

Anyways, great chapter. I am glad we got a look into Nabiki's life. Nicely done, and keep up the great work!

~Kohana

*snicker* I can hardly wait for Nabiki to discover Ranma is one of her biggest clients, and vice-versa.

Excellent chapter.

It seems that still he isn't quite ready to face it. And now other people are being drawn into it as well, I wonder what this will mean...

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

You are too angsty for me. :(

there is some happiness coming down the pipe, right?

I love your writing! You have a talent for expressing emotions thorugh your writing that touched my heart as I read your written words.

I can't wait to find out what will happen next.

lol, i'm loving it! who is touya's dad tho, must continue reading to find out, PLEASE POST SOON I'M BEGGING!

All I need to know is, who is Touya's dad? Cause if he's 8, he can't be Ranma's.
Intrigue with my fav couple, BLISS! :D

this is turning out to be a great read - you take the time to set up the situation and draw out the characters. I like it. However, I find it hard to see Ranma as a business tycoon of sorts, just cuz I don't see that kind of patience and organization in him - whether he's 16 (like in the manga) or 26. Nor would I see him going to a therapist for help, doctor yes, therapist no.

Still, I like your story and can't wait for the next chappy!

really good update son