Amen to that I feel you have a bit of a prophet in you your poetry teaches even for those who do not understand the meaning of God as for my poetry I shall puplish my lessons one day. God fuels true poets. You are one. I believe in your abilities. Have patience and you will see the light. I have, and you will also If you focus more. Call me crazy but faith is all I have.

I like it. Makes you start to think. I ask myself that on occassion. Very well done.

God loves us because He is Love. :)

I like.

That is true, if something can love a human it's God, or Jesus. God loves animals too. They are his creation too... seriously, are you a vegetarian? If you aren't one you should reexamine that poem of yours about the mandrakes. I'm not one either, so don't think I'm trying to "recruit" you or anything. But, hey, if you are then that means you have beliefs of your own that contradict the Bible, and I'm sure you're more familiar with the post-flood part of Genesis than I am. So, Ha! I've got you! You write a poem like that and if you're a vegetarian, technically you're contradicting the Bible, but if you aren't one then you believe that a few cells have more "soul" than an animal that was raised, probably to expand america's growing waistlines. Either way you are trapped because I found YOUR loophole! You're a hypocrite. That's okay though, I just want to see you admit it. I still love you. And I like your writing either way.

Too true.

Very true Very True. Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha. Aw yeah. Please read my story It's better than your. He he he he he he he.(Crazy laugh) Just kidding He he he he he he he. (Pardon my laughter. I'm stupid today. He he he he he ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! Kiysta is me's retared sister. He he he he!

I like that.

So awesome-I ask myself the same question.

wow...I wrote something kinda similar to this in my Book of Yahweh fic (ch. 5) where my OC asks why Yahweh loves us. He bascially says because he can...he doesn't really need a reason to love us. God is love, so I guess loving people is only natural for Him. That's what I think. Anywho, nice job.

You expressed what I feel perfectly!

Good writting and God bless always!

(Any chance of you writting more...?)*hinthint*

i have one word for you: AMEN!

Oh my gosh. You know how true that is? But in case this is a real cry for help, remeber, He loves us freely. He loves us becau8se he does! There is no reason for him to love us. All we can do is love him back and d wehat he asks of us.

THIS DOES NOT BELONG ON FANFICTION! IT HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH ANY FANSTUFF! IF YOU MUST SHOW THIS POEM TO THE WORLD PUT IT ON FICTIONPRESS!

I do want to review. This is such a good poem- and it's so true and amazing, and- gosh, I don't know what to say except for the fact that I love the fact you've written this poem.

The last few lines- especially the last line- is so powerful and so true. And it's so beautiful because it's true.

(There's only one line which I think may have a grammatical error- and I'm soo sorry to be picky, it's just that below the 'Submit Review' button it says 'It is extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved. A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer' and so... the line, "Everyone, me included, act like animals"- I feel that it would flow smoother if it read 'Everyone, myself included, acts like animals.')