yay, a darkness fic! and again i say yay! this was a good fic. very jackie. now it says at the bottem that there'll be a sequel? just a couple comments; the ratings a lil too high i think, u could get by with a pg13 for this, and michael speaks in old english with jackie then normal with the other angel-was that just for show with jackie? it was a lil out of place. but good fic. im so glad i found a couple in here. ttyl!

quite interesting... yes, indeed. you write well, luv. have you been reading the darkness for awhile? so i would take it that you know something about the Darkness, and his enemies? You see, i'm searching about info on the Darkness, and... eh, i'll explain it to you in my email.

great work, and keep it up!

That was awesome! You really have Jackie's character down. The darklings always crack me up hehehe. This is an excellent fanfic

While I'm here, might as well comment on this story.

It's.. good. Different from what I'm used, and it definitely got me interested in the comic.

Oh, I'm not certain I'll stay on, but at least it will alleviate my boredom a bit.

Thanks.

I read this one a little while ago, on your web page. Very good - When can I see the sequel in it's full form? I can't wait to see what you have in store for poor Jackie...

Wow. I loved this. I already read your Top Cow threads and now I see you're a fanfic author. Cool!

I've read this elsewhere and met you(by e-mail of course) and have

told you what a great story this is...but I have to say it again!

Awsome, totally spectacular! You are a talented artist too(but I

already told ya). Sequal! _

it's nice to see someone qualified givin' it to jackie once in awhile! a nice & tight piece, Aa!