Poor, poor, poor Jun... I wonder if she'll ever have a happy ending?

Raging Lion

oh man...Jun definatly has the wrong end of the stick here!!
ah well..i just hope she sees sense soon!

I liked it... every chapter just gets better and better...

Raging Lion

Hi. I've been reading your stories and I can see some improvements here and there. One of my complaints is your stories show up so abruptly with updates and are extremely short in length when read. You should try making them longer. They don't need to be very long, but they don't need to be very short either.

Also, with this story, putting the words in italics isnt needed. That is unless your quoting the dialouge of what the character's thoughts are.

Otherwise, everything else is as it should be. You have a good day!

WOW! wickedly awesome so far!

wicked song to go with a wicked chapter..well done! brilliantay!

~henred5~

Man... cliff hanger now I'm that much more deperate... update soon! and is it possible for me to add u to my msn messenger? I'd really like to talk to you.

I like this story, I actually find it really easy to follow. And I really like the voice in her head. It is one of those stories that really made you curious for more..update soon

WeasleyLover

-thunder clashes- Reflection? Ouch. That's gonna be shocker eh?? Loved it and I am so every waiting for a update! You must update it's like food for my depserate mind.^^

Raging Lion

Sad... poor Jun-chan. OR at least I'm thinking it's Jun-chan. Harsh man... harsh.

Raging Lion

(But I still liked it!) Bravo!

Kawaii! I mean, I feel bad for them, but Jin is so tender it's cute! Man, that chappie rocked!

Raging Lion

Wow. This is really cool! I'm only on hte second chapter, but it's all so captivating! At first I couldn't figure out who it was until you said Jin.^^ Nice, I can't wait to read more!

Raging Lion

awesome..for a minute i actually though it was that UNKNOWN being from Tekken Tag! lol :D

~henred5~

poor Jun...she must be realy scarred..welp..gud so far...kep it up! ;D

I wounder if Kazuya is featured in dis story..wud be pretty cool if he was!
pretty short chapter..but still gud!

~henred5~