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dictator panda-chan
2009-11-11 . chapter 10
ah, this story is so cool! i have read one of your other stories, Juppon Buki, and i loved it so i thought i'd try this one out too. please review very soon; i'd like to read more of it.

i really enjoy various elements of this story, including the humor and romance. you write very well too :D
the defector i know was suigetsu, but what did he get for sasuke? hm...i hope for future romance between sasuke and sakura, as they are my favorite couple.

anywho, keep doing what you're doing and please update soon!

ciao

dictator panda-chan
ChristinaAngel
2009-09-09 . chapter 10
Sasuke attacked Ino?! Oh Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke. I liked how Ino talked to Neji about Tenten and how he as nice to her as she worried about one of her friends' dying early and I liked how Shikamaru was available for Ino to talk to, that was sweet. Danzo is so annoying, I hate that he's being proved right about Sasuke. Thanks for updating!
MissMercurial
2009-08-20 . chapter 10
You've done something I thought to be nigh impossible - romance with PLOT.
(Because God forbid anything other than romance-related drama happen in reality.)
I'm just as interested in what happens next suspense/action-wise as I am romance-wise.
You've even managed to basically rule out some opposing ships (GaaHina, KankyTen) and yet still keep the tension just right :)
AND it's canon-compatible (mostly)!
Truly a feat that I look forward to reading more of.
ArmorOfGeddon
2009-08-17 . chapter 10
Why am I not surprised that Danzou screwed up (or maybe let it happen on purpose)? That said, Ino really should have tried to get some back-up, like looking for one of the guy's or anyone period.
gambit
2009-08-14 . chapter 10
Nicely done. I thought it'd be an introspective character piece - nothing wrong with that, mind - but it seems to be picking up towards the end there. Not much to comment, I mostly read really long fics so the shortness of this one felt a bit of a let down, heh.

Hope you continue writing, there's a bunch of us waiting for updates :)
Yukixshuu
2009-08-06 . chapter 9
this story is simply ingenious. You are an amazing writer! Keep up the excellent work!
bright-rebellious
2009-08-04 . chapter 10
I totally love your fic! I mean... it's the first fic I see that really "values" kunoichi!
you're a great autor, and I mean it :)
I hope you'll be updating soon

Good luck.

BR.

-- forgive my english, I'm not english but I do try my best --
Kumiko-oneechan
2009-07-25 . chapter 10
this is a rly good story!!
half-note
2009-07-21 . chapter 10
Wow, wow, wow. Do we have action here? Peaking action... :3
I'm excited. :D
I'm sure you're happy to have people backing you up for this years, I'm sure it's a great feelings. This sure is worth it, I enjoy reading it a lot.
Of the few fanfictions I still wait patiently for updates, it's hard to search amongst all the...not so worthwhile ones. :/
Good work again! Congrats!
Ps. Love Ino!
sand tessen
2009-07-20 . chapter 10
The suspense, dang it. THE SUSPENSE!

Why?!

Anyway, great chapter! I can't wait to see what the heck Sasuke is up to this time.

Keep it up!
CoolDuck
2009-07-14 . chapter 10
OMG! I just read your story and I'm in love with it!
I love the charactes personalitis and th pairings!The stuff about the Hyuuga's was funny :D .Yayz, it's Tenten's turn next . Woop! Hopefully some nejiten , huh?;P. And some action's haapening, hm, wonder what Sasuke's wants in Konoha?? Sakura's reaction to the end of the opera and seeing Sasuke was really heart warming..

Ah..I really need to quit my rambling now.Sorry if that didn't make sense, but it's love. *.*
Anyways..Pleaase updates soon!
quivering quill
2009-07-10 . chapter 10
don't kill ino, please!
ByLanternLight
2009-07-08 . chapter 10
Wow, intense dedication from Ino there. Cool work.
aotrs.commander
2009-07-07 . chapter 10
Entertaining read. i shall look foward to the continuation. Keep up the good work.
icecandy74
2009-07-06 . chapter 10
as soon as i read pointed teeth i knew it was Suigetsu!
omg it was soo good!
what does sasuke want?
please update soon!
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