|Reviews for Kunoichi in the City|
| TheMasterOfEmocorns 3/1/13 . chapter 15
I have faith in your ability to keep working on this fic!
It is great!
| drunkwithlove 1/7/13 . chapter 15
Please updateeee! :3 i love this story so much and i badly want to know what happens nextt! :))))))
| Spartan1 10/27/12 . chapter 15
| HeIght 10/5/12 . chapter 15
A moment later, all four feet, seven inches of my father came into the focus.
Is Tenten's father really 4 ft. 7 in. ?
| FairyTaleFancy 9/2/12 . chapter 15
While I would be sad if you chose not to continue it, I want you to know this is probably my favorite "Naruto" story. It's lovely to see the girls be normal teenagers AND kickass ninja. Fantastic!
| x0SilverFeathersx0 6/27/12 . chapter 11
My favorite chapter.
| cookiiex 6/4/12 . chapter 15
I love this! Honestly, this is the one fic where the kunoichi really act like teenaged girls. They are so in character too! I absolutley adore them! I know this is very slim but, please update soon :)
| slice-of-insanity 5/30/12 . chapter 15
The girls in your story are infinitely more likeable than in canon. I nearly died at the hospital flirting scene. ;)
| wonderlandbomb 4/21/12 . chapter 6
I'm seriously laughing like an idiot. I love your story so far!
| Shubhs 2/13/12 . chapter 15
Love the story! :D
There were quite a few grammatical errors in the previous chapters so I would recommend that you proof-read at least thrice before uploading a chapter.
I like the way the story is progressing. Please do continue.
| Falcon's Jade 12/21/11 . chapter 15
Amazing, the focus on the girls without super-powering them suddenly and STILL making them grow and develop was very well written. I love how there isn't crazy Hyuuga or council bashing, and the other characters play some pretty good roles! I love how the sand siblings are getting mixed up in all this too. Please do update soon!
| aloe tea 11/17/11 . chapter 11
beautiful! there was a really nice and believable buildup to the nejiten moment _ tenten's uncertainty with compromising her friendship with neji was realistic, and the "she was right" conclusion tenten comes to is truly sweet. and neji's mad dash to save the day was somehow unbelievably romantic without being sappy at all. i have no idea how you managed that, because the whole i-will-always-save-you scenario is inherently corny...-_-;
anyways, very nice! melikes :)
| LilithiaRW 11/15/11 . chapter 15
Ahahahahahahaha this story is hilarious! Update soon!
| bubblegum days 8/5/11 . chapter 15
Oh my God. I was in stitches. Between Inoichi's all-caps dialogue, Lee's sheer awesomeness, and the freaking battle axe ... just, O h my God. Hilarious.
| bubblegum days 8/5/11 . chapter 13
This story was funny from the start, but this chapter was just downright hilarious. I was laughing out loud and everything.