Reviews for Prophets, Pahwraiths, Emissaries, and Reckonings

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StarVix 2007-07-20 ch 6,	abuseYOU STILL HAVEN'T TOLD ME WHO THE FIFTH IS! I MUST KNOW! Boy, this chapter is a paradox if I ever read one. my brain hurts. . . Could you at LEAST tell me if the Fifth is an OC or not? PLEASE? I NEED to know!
Misti Wolanski 2007-07-11 ch 6,	abuseInteresting story; it makes me hope that maybe, just maybe, I can have my paradoxical story make half as much sense as you've accomplished here. :-) Of course, you're running your paradox with a focus on the non-linear to tell the linear; I'm (trying to) use linear to express the non-linear, after a fashion. I'm sorry if I sound like I'm rambling; I just find your story highly interesting to ponder, particularly when I compare it with my own ideas. Oh, and I've guessed from pretty early on that the Fifth is Ziyal, even before you started leaving some of the more obvious hints. I don't remember what first made me suspect it. -Misti
Kate Andromeda 2007-05-29 ch 6,	abuseWhat a great story and so complex. I like it. Please update,soon.
Christiana Anderson 2007-03-08 ch 5,	abuseA good story! A shame you haven't yet updated it though - has it been completely abandoned or is there hope?
StarVix 2007-03-07 ch 5,	abuseWell, suffice it to say you've gained a devout reader! Your spelling and grammer are good, your plotline amazing and whether you know it or not, your cliffhangers are awesome. I HAVE to find out who the Fifth is. Don't you DARE decide to drop this for ANY reason. This goes on my favorites and please don't wait too long to put up your next chapter.
Aldrian Kyrrith 2006-10-07 ch 5,	abuseThis is a very good story; well written and very engaging. I especially liked the nonlinear component of it. Good luck on your next chapter.
buffalo1fromSalem 2006-10-07 ch 5, anon.	abuseI just discovered this today. You should be writing for Paramount. Your story is beter than their finalie.
TheVulcanPrincess 2006-10-06 ch 5,	abuseI just discovered this story, and I like it. You have a talent for writing non-linear scenes in a way that is understandable to us linear folks. I haven't read any of the DS9 books, but your story makes me want to pick them up and give them a try. I hope to see more soon!
Lilith Kayden 2006-10-06 ch 5,	abuseI very much enjoyed your new chapter. Yes, it will be nice to see more of Kyra's point of view in the next couple of chapters. You also said that only one person inthe Galaxy knows who Garek realy is, and that's because he explained at length to Dr. Bashir. Unless he is the 5th, and knows it (which seems unlikely, because he probably wouldn't tell Julian this so far in advance)you have a real surprise for us. Frankly, I hope that you give a good full two chapters to explaining Garek's secret and his alliance of sorts with his friend Dr. Julian Bashir. Although Colonel Kyra's point of view in the next two chapters will prove very interesting, I'm suggesting that you write four chapters in all and in suficient length (not short.) This way both Garek and Kyra would each receive the equal time for explaining the intriguing and fascinating stories of their own that they deserve. If anything, from what you have said thus far, Garek's mystery actually seems the more intriguing and tantalising of the two--you have made it seem by far the more important (whether that was your intention or not.) --Lilith Kayden
jrhughes3068 2006-09-20 ch 4,	abuseInteresting story arc. I hope you plan to continue to expand upon Kira's involvement. I always assumed that her test of faith was meant to ready her for some higher or more difficult duty in the service of her faith and people. Good job.
Lilith Kayden 2006-07-02 ch 4,	abuseThis is good. In brief a story this good really should be continued, even if DS9 stories don't get AS many reviews as some of the other less sophisticated sites do. So, please do update--even if you havn't received as many reviews as you might like. I just discovered your story this evening. So, I'm reviewing July 2, 2006. --Lilith Kayden
Chris 2006-03-28 ch 4, anon.	abuseI think you have a very good story going on here and I would love to read more. I really want to know who the fifth emissary is and I believe the Sisko is the true emissary.
Kyra 2006-02-05 ch 4, anon.	abuseHm. Cliffhanger. Keep writing, very good chapter but keep writing.
Stoko 2006-02-04 ch 4,	abuseGood start ^_^ I almost didn't read it when you mentioned that it took place after events in some of the books - which I haven't read. Although your final comment, that it was inspired by Millennium? That's the one DS9 book (or the 3 DS9 books, you know what I mean =P) that I've actually read, and it ruled. And so far, it looks like you've got the style of writing down pretty damned well. Can't wait to see where you're taking this, good luck ^_^
Kyra 2006-01-29 ch 3, anon.	abuseYou're welcome. Consider this another one. (I have to leave and head back to school in a few minutes, so I'll just say that your story is continuing to be wonderful.)

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