Aww! Poor Vash! He just doesn't get a break!

lol Loved it!

I think this is a cute and silly story. Usually I like to read different sorts, but this was adorable. There were some small spelling, structure, and capitalization errors, but otherwise, this was okay. LOL, I can't help *loving* the part when Vash says, "WHAT looks so appetizing about my REAR END?" That was kind of funny. I was surprised that Millie watched Vash, laughing. You'd almost think that she'd try to help out. I guess Wolfwood's rubbed off on Millie a bit. =)

Run Wolfwood, Vash has changed from his pacifist ways! (Refering to the last sentence) LOL, that was funny. A distracting thing here is the capitializing letters when they weren't suppose to be there. But other then that, FUNNY!

^_^ ha! That's funny! Seriously! ^_^ If no one thinks thats funny...they may not be a Vash fan >.> ~looks at the last sentence 'I Am going to Kick...Your...**!'~
Hmm...I thought Vash was commited to non-violence... I'm gunna read your Karaoke Heaven one next ^_^ So I'll leave a comment there too!
.^_^v Love & Peace!!

LOL! This is so funny!

You're still not quite getting the whole capitalization thing, which worries me because, unless you're younger than ten, one would think you'd have this down by now.
If you want positive reviews you need to pay attention to your writing and come up with something more original. Karaoke isn't original and neither are zoo fics. It may be funny for you and your friends, but for us it's nothing but a repeat of the meant-to-be-funny, random stories. Any spur-of-the-moment idea you get probably isn't going to be original. If you want good reviews you need to spread out and work on some point behind what you're writing.

YAY

Me be the first one to review!

YIPPEE!

Well, I like it, and I don't really think it needs a second chapter anyway.

Not like my opinion matters for anything.

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