Share/Save/Bookmark
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Hold Up - Reviews: Page 1 of 6

Spice of Life
2007-01-28
ch 11,
abuseLoved it! Excellent job.
Mel
2006-05-27
ch 11, anon.
abusei liked that this story was about how ** up Mark is. lots of people ignore mark's problems for rogers, but i'm glad someone remembered that mark's a basket case too :)
Aisalynn
2006-03-23
ch 11,
abuseHehe. Roger the penguin. Adorable.
rockgodsdoitbetter
2006-03-18
ch 11,
abuseAw. You gave me fluffy tears. They are so cute. You picked penguins. I still like the dolphin idea, but oh well. This was equally good. Overall it was a funny chapter. Good just writing Mark going through withdrawal.
cameragirl
2006-03-18
ch 11, anon.
abusei loved it
the penguin bit was especially adorable
the whole story was well played out
i liked how marks withdraw wasnt violent either
cant wait to see what you have coming next!
iCraft
2006-03-18
ch 11,
abuseaww. thats the most adorable thing ever! hehe he draws the line at the scarf. thats hilarious! i loved it!!
Melissa Brandybuck
2006-03-17
ch 11,
abuseHeehee, that's sweet. I love penguins too, I have about 10 stuffed penguins. ;) Weird, eh?

Aw, I can't believe it's over! It was a good story. Please write some more stuff! I like your writing.
I Heart Wolf
2006-03-17
ch 11,
abuseBravo! Good ending, I really loved it!

Aww.. horny penguins named Roger.. heehee!
Shadows in the City Lights
2006-03-17
ch 11,
abuseGod, I love this fic: “But if you think that’s gonna make me let you bring him into bed with us you’re wrong. I draw the line at the scarf.”

That line made me /die/! Love it love it LOVE IT, please keep updating!
closetdramafreak
2006-03-17
ch 11,
abuseokay, so I promised a long review. It is probably a waste of space...
I love your writing, you know I love your writing but I thought it was worth mentioning, and because if I'm going to write a long review, then I need as much space fillers as possible. I know this wasn't your favorite story, but I thought you tied it together nicely. And of course we love Mark and Roger, Angsty Mark, Roger comforting Mark...what? review? oh right! You are definately one of the greatest slashy RENT authors out there.
Although nothing can be as wonderfly penned as Guilty Pleasures (hehe), or that Nancy Drew songfic you wrote to Hungry Eyes and I made fun of a lot, this was a really enjoyable story (poor Mark). And of course the Kama Sutra was the icing on the cake.

Yes I know this review cannot be constituted as "long" but I'm tired, its somewhat late (not really, but sh) so deal with it. (Tribute to Adam's eyelashes)
Love ya!
chasingdestiny213
2006-03-17
ch 11,
abuseThat was cute.. I loved this story!! Amazing job.. Mark and Roger are so perfect together!! Kudos!

*-Chasting Destiny(..don't we all??)-*
leatharegee
2006-03-17
ch 11,
abuseAw! That was so adorable! I loved the scene with the zoo, and the bit with Mark wanting Roger under the table with him! ^_^ Yay!

Congrats on a great finish!
rockgodsdoitbetter
2006-03-17
ch 10,
abuseHey, good chapter. Roger's reaction was perfect and in character. You managed to keep Mark in character while being addicted to drugs, so good job. You're going to start reading this soon so I should go. Good job. Good luck with the next chapter.
PrepPrincess48
2006-03-15
ch 10,
abusegood job! I really like the plot. Sometimes it is like Mark thinks so little of himself even tho he's the one who's helping everyone else through it.keep updating!
Melissa Brandybuck
2006-03-15
ch 10,
abuseI can't believe Mark would take drugs...
Well, I'm waiting on the edge of my seat to see how the withdrawal episodes would turn out.
I think it'd be great if Mark started to get violent, then Roger would have a taste of what he did to Mark.
Good job!
Keep up the good work.
Return to Top