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| Tiani 2008-01-09 ch 7, anon. | abuseIh! Cliffhanger! ;) Oh, at long last you've updated the story dear. And it's just as beautiful as before. Can't wait to read more, but I guess you're busy with studies now... Well, keep up the brilliance (as it seems I've lost mine...) t |
| Tiani Lunaris 2006-06-06 ch 5, | abuseAh, beautiful story, dear... You have certainly developed in your abilities as a writer, and have now mastered the arts of cliff-hangers, and how to capture your readers attention. I know fully well how much you want constructive criticism, but to be quite honest.. I can't find any small errors to point out! Guess having a beta is paying off... ;) Well... Chat later, and we might chat later today. Ya pal T |
| Tiani Lunaris 2006-03-10 ch 3, | abuseBeautiful... Just beautiful... *starts aplauding before realizing one of the vampirehunters uses the same line in Vampirehunter D* Err... think your stories are always great to read, and I have no criticism on this part whatsoever. Only comment though; when is the next chapter comming? Keep up the brilliance! "Chocolate and puppy eye hug" Tiani |
| Renmiri 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseA mystery and FFX ? Cool! Love it! |
| Fantasy Girl7 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abusegreat start...keep going with this good work. |
| New Zealand 5 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseVery intersting, a new insight into the fayth. Don't stop. |