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Reviews For: The Ancient Fayth

Tiani
2008-01-09
ch 7, anon.
abuseIh! Cliffhanger! ;)
Oh, at long last you've updated the story dear. And it's just as beautiful as before. Can't wait to read more, but I guess you're busy with studies now...
Well, keep up the brilliance (as it seems I've lost mine...)
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Tiani Lunaris
2006-06-06
ch 5,
abuseAh, beautiful story, dear...
You have certainly developed in your abilities as a writer, and have now mastered the arts of cliff-hangers, and how to capture your readers attention.
I know fully well how much you want constructive criticism, but to be quite honest.. I can't find any small errors to point out! Guess having a beta is paying off... ;)

Well... Chat later, and we might chat later today.

Ya pal
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Tiani Lunaris
2006-03-10
ch 3,
abuseBeautiful... Just beautiful... *starts aplauding before realizing one of the vampirehunters uses the same line in Vampirehunter D*
Err... think your stories are always great to read, and I have no criticism on this part whatsoever. Only comment though; when is the next chapter comming?

Keep up the brilliance!
"Chocolate and puppy eye hug"

Tiani
Renmiri
2006-01-24
ch 1,
abuseA mystery and FFX ? Cool!

Love it!
Fantasy Girl7
2006-01-24
ch 1,
abusegreat start...keep going with this good work.
New Zealand 5
2006-01-23
ch 1,
abuseVery intersting, a new insight into the fayth. Don't stop.
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