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Reviews For: The Slaves

hollywoodstar4ever
2007-09-10
ch 1,
abuseNot bad, not bad at all. Are you planning on finishing this fic or are you just letting it go? if you are continuing, please let me know. you have a good story, but you should get going and finish it. believe or not, some people really like reading these fics. I do. ^.^
merixthexninja
2006-12-29
ch 1,
abuseHaha, cute. Lots of potential here, but try being a bit more descriptive and mix up the language a bit.
Autumn Pearl
2006-04-26
ch 1,
abuseNice first chapter. For your name, it doesn't have to be about Inuyasha unless you want it to. It could be something random. Can't wait 'til you update! Oh yeah, it's Mrs. Higurashi, not Hugarashi. Update soon please!
Dark Videl
2006-02-06
ch 1,
abuseNot bad. Pretty good length, not too short and not too long. This story has potential.

~VB
alchemistgrl09
2006-01-23
ch 1,
abuseThat was pretty damn good! I totally can't wait to read more so plz plz plz udpate soon!
ja ne,
Dani
Aria-wolfstar
2006-01-22
ch 1,
abuseThat was good! Update soon okay!? ^_^

~Till Next Time~
Aria

ooh, i.d. names? hmmn
Dog Ears# or something?
I dunno, not good at that, lol
Rupali-m
2006-01-22
ch 1,
abuseGreat first chapter ^-^ Cant wait for teh next chapter, even if it mesans no happy ending lol:P AGAIN GREAT STORY AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON ^-^
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