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soulman3
2009-07-22 . chapter 9
This was a alright story.
Sailor Nibaru
2009-06-25 . chapter 9
Another good story, and yay, it was longer =D I have to say, I kind of miss the original style of writing, short, to-the-point, a little rushed but whatever, that was in "A Small Possibility"... but this is good too! Damn, Drakken's dead? Gonna miss him =/ And I hope there's more of Kasy Ann and Sheki Go in the next one! Good job again =D.
The-Voice1020
2009-06-14 . chapter 1
Great work on this little universe that you have created. I love you stories and hope that you continue this series. I can not explain how much entertainment they have brought into my life. Please keep up the good work and hope to see more stories soon.
KiGo-lover
2008-12-19 . chapter 9
Okay after all the storys I've read of your so far that was the weirdest but also one of the funniest! Everytime Shego did something like start the pillow fight or stop the girls from getting the treats on the last chapter I couldn't help but laugh! Thanks for writing.
Aceina
2008-12-09 . chapter 9
wow good fic verry dark i felt sry for dr draken it seemed liek he regreted his life in the end verry good fic thoe i love ure owrk
Big Ace 1
2008-05-12 . chapter 9
Dear NoDrogs
That was An interesting Spinoff Inro, what will Team Stopable
Get into next?
By the way What about Letting GJ find Drakkens Oreginal Retrovires and help both {the Possibles and the stopibles
have children?
Keep up the good work Big Ace 1
Amarin Rose
2008-03-27 . chapter 9
I must be getting better at the foreshadowing thing, because I actually saw the threesome thing coming when Ron and Yori went to meet Monique!

Of course, it could just be my perverted mind. :P

Six million dollar mole rat, cool! For a while there you had me thinking it was Monique that was paralyzed (so maybe I'm not getting better at foreshadowing), but with the mini-Ron on the loose I wonder if that will hers and Ron and Yori's first kid?
The-Jaron
2008-02-07 . chapter 9
kool story

a bit sad on moniques part

but still good

Jaron out
Mars Project
2008-01-18 . chapter 9
Ok, how is it possible for you to keep constantly outdoing yourself! Ok love the fact that Ron is an uber badass whenever he wants to be now, and the fact he's shacking up with two INCREDIBLY HOT babes! This calls for a DOUBLE BOOYAH!

I wonder what will become of Senor Senior Sr. and his little Ron clone? And I was totally shocked to see Drakken killed off! In my opinion out of all the villains, he was the best of the bunch...T-T

But I feel incredibly bad for Monique, although she's apparently shacked up with Ron and Yori, she can never have kids of her own...Yes I shed a few tears for here there...

I am just loving these stories I seriously can't get enough of them. Keep up the great work!
DragonSword35d
2007-10-17 . chapter 9
Okay, that ending? Hilarious! And Ron is about as lucky as a guy can get!. I don't know what I was thinking when I stopped reading this last year! Glad I decided to reread.
castle noir
2007-06-10 . chapter 9
i'm totally with shego on this one... lol yori and monique should so be able to tell they are more then ron can handle... lol anyways, they make a much hotter couple!

still great fic!
ranma girl 14
2007-05-30 . chapter 9
Although its already a known fact, your stories are the absolute best. I can't wait for you to start the next fic ^_^
Alexander - Godslayer
2007-05-24 . chapter 9
Finally I finished reading this, which I think it is your longer work so far, so I'll make sure to make this one your longest review ^_^

For starting, I must mention that I was kinda surprised for the darker tone of this fic compared to its prequels, and the including of death for some characters really got me worried about what could happen next. For a moment, I must admit, I really though that Monique and/or Rufus were going to die, as I supose you made us want to think. Also, the whole drama in the last chapter was truly heartbreaking, not to mention full of surprises.

As far as I love drama and dark themes, it bugged me a bit to find this in the Small Possibilites series which, 'til now, had a much lighter tone with fluffy scenes, humor and some sexual innuendo now and then as the only "adult level" material. I'm not critizing your decisions, after all, this is your fic, I'm just giving my opinion.

One thing I must for sure mention about this fic is the "surprise" (if it can be called like that, it's rather... controvertial) of the fact that the main character is Ron instead of Kim and Shego, even if the fic started with these later two as every other episode started. While Kim and Shego had their part, Ron was the one to face the main antagonist Noir Goable, defeat him, grow up from the experience and finally getting married in a very unexpected way. So far, Ron has become a very mature character in your fic.

Well, yeah. The outcome of Ron's romantic story was truly surprising. For a moment I thought that you were going to break the Ron/Monique pairing you had been developing so far and that I've come to like, and that it would turn into Ron/Yori, another pairing that I like but not if it means breaking one that I liked so far (Am I sounding too contradictory?). While I found it hard to believe that Ron had sleep with Yori while Monique was in the hospital (Sorry, but I sense some serious OOC here), I think I understand that you felt like you needed that so that things might turn out the way you wanted. I really never expected something as polygamy (Cultural and regional thing, you know), but it really turned out to be a nice decision, specially with the scene between Yori and Monique that you did near the end ^_^

I'd wish Kim and Shego would have had some more rol, but I think I should have guessed from the tittle that this wasn't going to be the case. Oh, well. I'll keep the hopes for the next time. At least I saw some development of Kasy and Sheki, both turning out to be mostly like I expected. Damn, I love these twins ^o^

Another thing I can't help but to mention is that I feel that, at the end, you were kind of lazy by using the "some time later" excuse to show us how things turned out, but avoiding to explain HOW. And man, I SO wanted to see Kim's reaction to the revelation about the romantic trio XD

Well, now focusing on the plot. It was surely interesting, charged with mystery, like the creation of the Supreme Evil One, and surprises, like Ron appearing in front of Noir instead of Kim and Shego, as -AGAIN- you clearly tried to make us readers believe.

About the Supreme Evil One, I must admit that at first I thought it was going to be a clone of either Kim and Shego, or both, but once again, I should have taken the tittle more seriously. The character was really evil and even scary at some point. I really loved the battle between Ron and Noir (It SO deserves a fanart!!). I felt kind of dissapointed that he died so "easily" (I mean, it was his very first battle!) but then again, with the Ron Mark 3 around, things might turn out quite interesting. OH! I almost forgot: Suffer rocks!! XD

What will come out of the new marriage now, I wonder. New sons and daughters? Some... possible future shipping for Kasy and/or Sheki? XD
Oh well. Time and you will tell ^_^

I really liked the fic, and I hope that the Small Possibilites series might go on as long as possible ^_^
I hope you liked the review.
Thanks for writting this fic, and see you around in the forum!!

PD: Why isn't this fic cataloged as Complete yet, uh?
minako366
2007-04-30 . chapter 9
^^ interesting pairs, but so cute ^^
Gothic Nny 777
2007-01-29 . chapter 9
WHOO! THAT'S a coll scene ya added there.
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