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| Undine 2006-04-06 ch 1,  | abuseAwesome. If you write a sequel, then that'd be a plus. |
| Mizu no Kokoro 2006-01-25 ch 1, | abusehaha~ that was cute^^ i liked how u kept them all pretty much in character~ good work keep writing! |
| HotaruGFC 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseA very cute story. I found the characters were quite in character and I loved the part of Borus getting distracted by the sleeping Chris. Constructive critism: make sure you re-read before you post. Quite often we'll (and I do this all the time...) type something and mistype it, but mistype it such that it makes sense to the computer, but isn't really what we meant to type. Re-reading really helps to catch those little things. Keep up the good work! |
| Exhile87 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseHehe, that was cute. I'm a big Borus/Chris fan and it's SO like Percy to do something like that to poor old Borus! =D |