WRITE! WRITE! WRITE! WRITE!

Ah, don't sweat it. I like fluffy scenes a lot.

wow. just wow. i read this over and over again and i absolutely loved it. i... there's just nothing i can say. great job.

Oh my god...that was so sad... *in tears*
Very good story!

I KNEW! I KNEW Roxas and Namine would appear!!

OKAY, OKAY FINE! This is a great story!! I'ma gonna go try and finish it...

omg! AW! That was so sad! BUT SO GREAT! I LOVED IT! GREAT JOB!

wow that really confused me...all those quotes, or whatever they are. that sounded pretty kool though.

theyre called organization thirteen

For a first story, incredible.

As far as quality goes? I'd say about two ranks below top notch, though my more emotional feminine side would say top notch anyway. Some grammar errors. Meh. Not that big of a deal.

Ending?

Lets put it like "A Knights Tale" did.

It has been weighed, it has been measured, and it has been found wanting.

intreguing prologue... and the sad thing is, i know exactly where all those quotes are in the game. replayed it too many times.

This story is a good story. Oh so sad, but really nice! Like everyone else, I can't wait for the sequel!

~SuperGirl93~

awesome story...can't wait for the sequel! :)

Great Story!1 of my FAVES

OMFG! I loved this story...the sequel BETTER be a happy ending...or i might cry...BOOHOO