| Reviews for When It Comes to Harry |
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Samantha 11/3/06 . chapter 1 That's cool. Very good. And it makes sense. |
karma11 8/26/06 . chapter 1that was so awesome i totally loved it sweet and realistic! |
Norbet 7/22/06 . chapter 1Great ending! Great story too, good job! |
Catchy Pen Name 7/21/06 . chapter 1It was very interesting reading everything through Ginny's eyes, and I think you were clever with it. She's such a little bantam at heart, isnt she? |
Bluu3 5/21/06 . chapter 1Ah I loved this. D Ginny's character was very-well displayed...and I love how you were able to incorporate her memories in without actually referring to the books. I also love how you incorporated those thoughts of young people...like being invincible. ] I really enjoyed reading this...especially because I am a fan of Harry/Ginny. And those last lines...well, not completely original, but it fit well, and I liked it. I'm always influenced by the beginning and the ending of a piece/story, and I loved the imagery where she would close her eyes and fall (undoubtedly trusting Harry), and he would catch her. I loved reading this. Thank you; it made my day. Bluu |
lala land 4/16/06 . chapter 1 that was absolutely delectable! lol I really liked the end, so beautiful! constructive critism, right. well, you shiftes tenses a bit, and there were a few grammer mistakes..but that's about it.. I liked how you mixed cannon into it without using quotes from the books D I like Ginny, and i don't like how there's hardly any character development for her in the books... but you did a fine job of that Please write more on Ginny D |
HeathroBonk 1/23/06 . chapter 1"Harry was worth getting hurt and taking risks for." How could you of all people write that? Freak. I liked it anyway though even with the blatant Bright Eyes rip offs. |
Black is the New Pink 1/22/06 . chapter 1Klent...you didn't let me beta...EVIL. Twas good. I really liked this one... there was a few there, the sentences...but other than that. Nice job! I'll be sobbing quietly in the corner...but good story. hehehehehehe. See you tomorrow for MATH TEAM! Defy Gravity |
theKRITIC 1/22/06 . chapter 1 Lovely job. It's sweet...I'm reffering this to a friend who loves fairy tales. I think she'll love it as much as I did. |