great story

More!

Please continue this story, it is so good!

Please write more about this story. I can't wait to read what happens.

You really need to continue this its too good to let languish unfinished.

You have to write more, i just got into fanfic and you just can't stop here, although teh shows been gone for awhile, your story must continue lol at least for my sake )

So finish the story already!1

I really like this story and can't wait to see what Tom does to keep Sloan from Lewis. So plaese keep going, I can't wait!

I liked your story about Lewis stalking Tom and Sloan. I used the claiming/marking thing too in my fiction. The only thing that you might want to do is have a line or two about how Lewis escaped. Other than that i think it't excellent.

Oh, I love this story you have got to write more of it! Please, please, please, please write more.

I like what you've set up so far. However, your grammar and spelling need some work. There are a couple of lists that you could get this beta-read on if you want. I'd certainly like to see where you take this story.

I really liked your story and would like to see more. Thanks for the great read.

Great beginning, i hope that you are going to continue the story!

Please continue *grovel beg grovel

OK, I have the other parts to this already written out, but I have misplaced them so bare with me until I can find them ok.