A great story. I liked the part where Gil sais that he would have taken the case but would have ended up riding the roller coaster and would have forgotten about the case.

*chuckle* nice story, I liked the kiss-scene and how you saved your bu*t out of it :)

ROLFMAO!
That was a very intelligent and funny story, but I think the ending was too open.
And of all factories to be burnt, a SPORK?!! LOL!

Yeah, it was a little confusing, but the wrap-up at the end was just laugh-out-loud funny. And thank you for giving us a moustache-free Nick.

Dang that was confusing! It was fun, tho! Keep it up!