Blue~e why do you not update anymo~ore? ; ; noone does... im so sad TT all these good fics... going to waste... *cry*

btw... :o any idea how to find Lady Nox's stories...? that is, if you ever come across this review.

we didnt have have an Alnel war 2 years ago without me knowing, did we? and all you crazy authors and authoresses died in an epic battle noone shall remember through the course of history?

...actually that'd be kinda cool. at least you'd get a footnote in a huge ** book. (and be completely omitted once everyone is digitized) :p

AH! WHAT HAPPENED TO ALBEL! GAH, you have to continue...though as you said, it goes back into 'Inside My Heart'...but still! UPDATE QUICK PLEASE! I'm dying, the lack of Alnel's puts sadness in my heart. GOOD JOB!

Great Story! They are one of my favorite couples! And I love stories that feature them. Your story is wonderful you play thier dynamic so well! Please, oh please continue!

*crawls out of hole*

That's right, I'm alive. *shifty eyes*

I was delighted to find an update to this. Well done, Blue. This made me a happy camper.

Now I must return to my Batcave!

Peace out!

Hey hey hey!! Hahaha, please update and not having to take ur medication is god! Happens to me too! Heheheh, great chapter!!

I like this story, mostly because I'm a huge Nel Albel fan.. I was pleased to see that you had updated it when I woke up at 2:56 this morning. To say the least I had to read...

“If they are unable to learn then it will be their incompetence that kills them!”
-- Whoa, Clair's right. That comment was so Albel-like it's almost scary. :)

"She knew it was up to her to help herself."
--Yeah, I'll agree with you, that Nel seems the type to be able to recognize when her actions are becoming irrational, and resolve to do something about it. And eventually, she'll recognize that she can't do it totally by herself...

It was kind of cute how Albel guarded her while she slept without her knowing...I can't blame him for being mad at her for acting foolishly, but I also can't blame her (much) for doing it...It's a symptom of how depressed she is...

I wonder if they'll meet in Kirlsa...well, I'll see next time. ^_^

SHAME ON ME! I haven't reviewed this yet, and I'm one of the people that BEGGED you to write a prequel! Well here I am!

WHAT AN AWESOME STORY! The first chapter was awesome! I didn't think it was gloomy like at all! It kind of fit with all that happened before the group's break up. And then the part at the desert! Nice! It truly was a great chapter! I LOVED IT!

WOW AND THE 2ND CHAPTER! Heh, seems like Albel is the only one who she can turn to, because he feels the same! Great chapter! Albel's caring side is shown, if only a little bit. I can't wait for the next one! PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! I'll be waiting!

I really really like this story so far! I think you've done a good job characterizing Nel, and I agree with how you made her angry as a 'self defense mechanism'. It's just how someone like her would have reacted.

>_> And...one other thing...Tanned Albel = *drool*.

XD Anywho, great job! Take your time and do your best on the next chapter! I can't wait to read it!

Heheh...for now all I can say is keep up the good work and UPDATE!!

For the love of Apris, it took me long enough to review this. XP At any rate, I absolutely _loved_ it. Albel is so frakin' Ic and... albel-ish. There are just no words. Heh... looks like Nel has a bit of a stalker problem developing, though. ^^ Top-rate work, so continue soon or else the firabbits will come and get you... and you know how vicious firabbits are. -shifty eyes-

(drops jaw onto floor) i...wow...this is just...wow...

sorry, i have abseloutley no helpful comment...

i remember the desert scene...yes, i remember it well...

wow...

Nice chapter please continue.

Woohoo! Sequel! Anywho, this is very nice and I love the style. Can't wait for more. Dark stories and romance stories are my favorites.

Peace out.

Yay! The sequel is beginning! Don't worry if it's a bit dark to start out. With Albel, it's hard to avoid some darkness. ;) Besides, then it's that much more of a bigger impact when his darkness finally starts to lift.

Nel's voice calms him down...One of these days Albel will recognize clues when they're in front of him... :)

A couple word-swaps:

"It’s a duel process of bending it to your will and doing its bidding." -- 'duel' should be 'dual'; that's a sneaky one.

"It was suicide to come out to the desert, and he was weary of anyone who would be in such a place." -- 'weary' should be 'wary' -- A lot of people do that one. ^_^ 'weary' means tired, 'wary' means cautious or suspicious.

"Her voice again. He allowed his eyes to wonder back to their pervious activity of watching her." -- I'm pretty sure you meant 'previous' instead of 'pervious'. :) And 'wonder' should be 'wander'. I didn't even notice that until I was typing this... ^_^

This seems like a good start to me! I like how you obliquely refer to the Romero events without having to go through all the details. I'll probably end up doing something similar in my story...

I'll be watching for the next one! Hmm...I wonder if we'll get to see Albel's thoughts during moments from 'Inside My Heart'...like when he corners Nel in the jail cell... No, don't worry about answering that, I'll wait and see with everyone else. ^_^