 SailorWednesdayMercury 2009-12-08 . chapter 26Great job, you are a terrific author! I'm on the edge of my seat! I want to read more, more, more! Update soon please! |
 Wolf07 2009-11-27 . chapter 26Thank You for contiuning this story. It is the only story that has my favorite pairings. So Thank You and Keep up the good work. |
 BlackKitt 2009-08-21 . chapter 25This story is absolutely amazing!
I love the couples you picked, especially SxS. You describe the romance so good, I love it!
Please continue writing^^ |
 SailorWednesdayMercury 2009-03-22 . chapter 25Great story so far, can't wait to read what happens next! read & review my Yu Gi Oh Stories in order please, A Community Performance 1, followed by A Community Performance 2! |
 Drowningfire 2008-08-01 . chapter 25I love this please continue, I can't wait to find out what happens next! |
 Jasmine5 2008-02-22 . chapter 25Poor Theif Bakura... that's so sad that he could not be with her. Anyways great job with this story and I can't wait to see what happens next! |
 AbsolutelyInsaneRomantic 2007-10-14 . chapter 4AIR:
"I come prepared. Heh heh."
*SQUEE*
You captured Kaiba's wry sense of humor PURR-FECTLY (in reference to "Fatsy Catsy")
It was pretty funny. The tense-changing thing wasn't as obvious, and I was all sighing satisfied-ly at the major overdoses of romantic-ness! I love overdoses of romantic-ness!!
Starlit Phantomess: . . .
Okay... that was... quick. I'm guessing Heishin will make a comeback, though?
I hope so.
Ah... SetoxShizuka/Serenity FOREVER!
Kyaa...
AIR: Yeah, it went along too quickly for me.
Ah... we have to go now.
But, do not fear, we WILL return!!
...Eventually.
Starlit Phantomess: IN AMERICA! |
 AbsolutelyInsaneRomantic 2007-10-14 . chapter 3AIR:
"Her mind, perhaps, but not yet her soul-
And never, ever, her heart."
Whoa... deep...
Fine, TID, be a wanker. Don't respond. *poke*
TID: Z...
AIR: No, you cannot call me Fatsy Catsy.
Stupid wanker.
TID: Z...
AIR: *poke*
One more thing. I keep noticing how you change between tenses. Maybe you could fix that? Whatever.
*Squee* Serenity and Seto are already together? SQUEE! Hmm... It would be sorta sweet if they weren't together yet and we could see HOW they were getting together, but whatever. ROMANCE, COME ON! *excited*
TID: Z... |
 AbsolutelyInsaneRomantic 2007-10-14 . chapter 2AIR:
"There's a mad man on the loose once again. But this time, he's made a fatal mistake. I will hunt him down to the ends of the earth if that's what it takes. No one will ever harm my beloved Tea!"
I just CAN'T imagine chibi Yugi saying that. (I know I'm a copycat, deal with it.) A bit OOC. And why would they head towards Kaiba Corp, of all things? (I will not stop. It's how my stories became totally rocking, anyways. GASP! I'LL STOP, I SWEAR! I'LL TURN OVER A NEW LEAF, I SWEAR!) Oh, wait... guess they're "friends" now... since this is taking place about two years after the series ended, right?
SP: Cool! So this is after Millenium World but before GX! Sweet! I love reading fics like these!
AIR: As I so heard from a "friend" (aren't you proud of me, TID? I'm remembering to cite my sources now! Crowley would be proud!)... oh, **, I forgot what I was gonna say... it's the curse of TID, I tell you!
SP: I'll type my own initials, thank you.
I'LL KEL YOU (not you, SetsunaKou, AbsolutelyInsaneRomantic here)!1!11!ONE!11!ONEONEONE!1
Oh, and me likey the chappie very muchos.
AIR: Oh. I like chocolate. |
 AbsolutelyInsaneRomantic 2007-10-14 . chapter 1*squee*
Oh... this is a joint review... so if I seem bipolar, I'm not.
I'VE BEEN LOOKING EVERWHERE FOR A SILENTSHIPPING FANFIC (actually, no, miss Take-It-Darkly has been). I would've settled with anything... as Serenity and Seto so obviously belong together (*hisses at the oblivious author*)! *glomps Seto* I won't mind giving away my baby to Serenity.
Miss 'Take-It-Darkly,' as my friend so calls me: Gee, I can almost see Seto calling out his Blue Eyes to pry him off you.
XD
AbsolutelyInsaneRomantic: *drools at the thought of Kaiba all angry-looking and HOTT*
Miss TID: *slaps forehead*
AbsolutelyInsaneRomantic: Miss TID was the one that got me hooked to silentshipping... three minutes ago... she has unleashed a monster unto this world...
Miss TID: Why'd I have to show her those videos on YouTube, why?!!
Not to mention your fanart, of course... It ROCKS by the way!!
AbsolutelyInsaneRomantic: *pouts* Why don't you EVER compliment me like this?? And after you love my stories so much... Miss TID, listen to these wise words: "You don't ever miss your well 'till it's dry."
Geddit?
I love your fanart! (blatantly hypocritical to her wise words) SQUEE! Your story-- NUZZY LOVES! Oh. Le gasp. I revealed my name.
Whatever.
I love all your couples! There should be some chibi OC character for poor left-out Mokuba, though... but that's just me.
Your story and vocabulary is very nice, but (ah, the picky side of me kicks in) I DID notice some grammatical errors and it DOES seem a bit too sudden (don't kill me, please? I DO love your story! And the pairings! And the idea! And the fanart that goes with it! *dreamy eyes*)
Miss TID: Congratulations. You managed to make her give you her name. She practically NEVER does that.
What my friend here is trying to say (to make a long story short), is that she absolutely LOVES everything about your story. Isn't that right, AIR?
AbsolutelyInsaneRomantic: You know what? I never knew my screename thinga-ma-bobr had a cool acronym like that. I shall be referring to myself as AIR from now on!
No, what I AM saying is that I love it. But it needs a little work. BUT I LOVE IT!
Miss TID: You do realize there are more chapters, right?
(Oh, burn...)
AIR: *mutters*
Oh, is this story done? Then I'm luckier than I thought I was! *SQUEAL* Well, if it's done, I suggest you go back and edit. Although this is just the first chapter we've read, so... who am I to criticize? (Oh my God, the apocalypse has come. I almost misspelled "criticize". Thank goodness TID doesn't know about that... *relieved sigh*)
Miss TID: She does now.
AIR: *Le Gasp* *Le Shock* *Le Faint* (to quote a certain other best friend of mine)
I SHALL NEVER LIVE THIS DOWN! Oh well. Another well of wise words: "Once you hit rock bottom, the only way to go is up." So. Upwards and onwards, I always say.
As of two seconds ago.
Miss TID: You mean, "Upwards and onwards... IN AMERICA!!"
Sorry, it's an Abridged quote. (Have you watched Yu-Gi-Oh! The Abridged Series, by the way? It's hilarious)
Anyways, I REALLY LOVED THE CHAPTER! IT ROX MY SOX OFF!! (to quote a friend of mine XD)
Also, the whole 'Le Gasp, Le Faint' thing up there - the friend she was referring to was ME.
Also, I'm gonna start calling myself 'Starlit Phantomess' - it's my penname anyways.
AIR: You freakin' copycat of catchphrases. In America.
Oh, you thought I was quoting YOU? Please. You're no friend of mine.
I was quoting another friend (who makes slideshows when she's hungry, hint, hint, TID).
Dude... this review is long... after a few charming words of love and utter adoration from AIR and TID, we'll be signing off.
In America.
SP: I told you...
MY NAME IS Starlit Phantomess!
GET THAT!!
AIR: Keep telling yourself that, dear.
SP: SHUT UP!
Oh yeah. My review. Really nice; you won't believe HOW long I've been searching for a story like this with SO many pairings in...
ME LOVES IT!!
Bye.
AIR: Caps lock works wonders, doesn't it, Miss Take-it-Darkly? |
 EtoileCyberPrima 2007-09-29 . chapter 24Awesome you've continued! I just love the SXS parts, keep it up! |
 xrubydragonx 2007-09-24 . chapter 24Yes you updated! Now, can you please update again? Please you're story is great! |
 xrubydragonx 2007-08-02 . chapter 1wow! this is really a great plot and I love your art! I actually found this story thanks to your art! please update soon I want to know what happens next! |
 CrazyGirlofManyNames 2007-07-25 . chapter 23Ah this is indeed an interesting story in which I like all the pairings and the plot is great. |
 ACGiacoma 2007-05-12 . chapter 23Please! You MUST update this story! I absolutely adore it! It's so good. I found out about it from the beautiful illustrations posted on deviantart, and the story is just as fantastic! Please, please update! |
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