Correction for my last review: it seems as if the fic is complete! In any case, fantastic story all the way around. I look forward to reading the rest of your work.

Wow, this was an amazingly interesting story. I honestly can't wait to read the rest! I love the character depth and the sarcastic tone of this fic. It's really well done!

I am in love with your dialogue! It's witty and well done. I can perfectly picture the pilots having such a conversation, and the musings between which are perfectly in character! Heero's thoughs last chapter were very interesting as well. I can't wait to read the rest.

I very much liked the way you wrote Duo, despite my usual dislike of 1st person fics. His thought process is really similar to mine! Heh, Jell-O! I have to admit, when I first found out where it came from I abandoned it too, not that I really apprecaited the texture much anyway. I hear most of the stuff is artificial now, but it's still disgusting. Headcheese is a food I can't even TOUCH. Ew. Anyway, the first chapter was really entertaining!

Lol. A cactus. I really do like these little arcy things =] They make me happy as well as having serious and good moments.

Lol. Only Duo would contemplate 'taste transference' and then think of Lucky Charms. =P

Wooh, this is incredibly awesome. i love it. Even more than the first. The way you alternate between POVs is cool, too. Really good, im off to read the next.

Storm

I have been reading each chapter as it came out, and I hope that this is only the end of this book. looking forward to the next book.

I love the way you captured heero at the meeting, and his reaction, i loved it!

Oh my GOSH! This keeps getting better and better. You know I wondered for a *very* brief moment when Heero was imputing the virus that things seemed… a little off in the flow of the story. You’re such a thorough author I couldn’t figure out why there was such big hole in Heero’s stay at the colony. GREAT JOB! I’m on pins and needles.

the next couple of chapters are some of my favorites. but i really enjoyed this twist to the story!

Well **. I was thinking that Heero just didn't send it, or forgot to because he was being maco. But... Heero! and Duo, 30 days to get one of those toasters up and running. Ah, can't wait to see what comes up next. Thank God for weekends.

please do tell me there is another arch~! they were getting together soo well!

ack! they screwed with heero's head! or did they...?

OMG! I SO didnt that coming. Neither did Heero. What a twist. Duo worried about what might happen to himself, but it had never crossed Heeros mind that it might be himself without the Preventers.Hes already got a shoulder to lean on, though. Maybe it'll be enough? I wait patiently for the next book.*holds breath and turns blue* Ok, maybe not so patient.*g*

Sakusha

ooch. now you have to follow this up. preventers? try... mates.