Drop of the Sweetest Poison 2008-10-25 . chapter 1Amazing writing! |
Emerald Gaze 2007-11-13 . chapter 1...okay...interesting..!^_^! |
WrathWings 2007-09-01 . chapter 1 Wow. This. Is. AWESOME! *coughs* Sorry. Anyways, I love how you kept Gaara in character with the last two lines. I can totally imagine Gaara thinking like this. ^-^ Thank you for writing this. |
Yu-Gi-Ah 2.0 2007-05-17 . chapter 1Another awesome one ^_^ you're very good when it comes to the deep meanings in the LeexGarra love! very nicely written!
BYE BYE! |
neo-kun 2007-05-13 . chapter 1 that was realy good I cant even find the right words to say how deep that was, nice job. |
desdemona 2006-11-26 . chapter 1 WOW, that was heavey-duty. that ones gunna keep me up. deep.
infact its a bit like a poem,same rythm same emotion
keep it up
wow |
Shinigami 2006-11-19 . chapter 1 *shakes head* WHY don't Temari and Kankuro JUST lock Gaara and Lee into a room without any windows, and let the 2 of them talk it out? And keep the rest of us out of the whole situation?! I bet that the rest of Suna and Konoha's civilians would prefer Lee to stay with Gaara, than to worry about a homicidal Kazekage showing up wanting Lee back... |
Kichino Sarafu 2006-10-21 . chapter 1Wow. That's deep, man. That's deep. *tear* This is one of the one's I like to call short & sweet. |
Pinkandbluecottoncandyonastick 2006-09-19 . chapter 1Wow...words can't even desrcibe. That was really deep and true. That prefectly described how Gaara (in my opinion) would feel towards someone. When I clicked on the story I was expecting some freaky sex action (yes, I'm a pervert), but man. Now I have to sit and think...that was really well written. I can't even begin to say how awesome that was. I'll just stop right now before I hurt myself from thinking to much. You know it's awesome...just accept it. |
Steel Quill 2006-07-28 . chapter 1I love how you managed to keep Gaara into this sly lusting beast of power.
I love how you managed to keep Gaara completely in character too.
And the fact that he's just this lusting character. My god I wish to see this in ACTION. |
KakashisGirls 2006-07-26 . chapter 1Woah! Awesome! So angsty and hot and dark. You did a very good job at describing these usually indescribable feelings. Very good. I'll be glad to see more from you. |
psychotic KAT 2006-07-18 . chapter 1Awesome! |
Noroi 2006-06-24 . chapter 1Great, though it seems more like he's talking to Naruto than Lee. Maybe that's just me. |
Yamistar 2006-06-18 . chapter 1Wow. This was absolutley amazing! Even though we never found out who's point of view this was from, I would have to say, without a doubt, it was Gaara. Of course, if it wasn't Gaara, I would be blown away. You portraied him perfectly. It was as if I was watching the anime or reading the manga, and Gaara was actually thinking all of this. Nicely done. |
Setg'-in 2006-01-30 . chapter 1umm...oka-ay that was um a little morbid near the end? but it was so cute, the way gaara acts i probably act like that to, if i was told i was a mistake, to never be born, and then have my father have someone kill me, i would be out for fuckin revenge, anyway that was so cute, they should put a character in the show for gaara i think he desperately needs it, well see yha |