Amazing what can be written in only two hours. Well done!

That was wonderful. Simply wonderful! =]

Ally: So sad but so good. Great Read. Thanks for the suggestion. Loads of ideas popping in my head. Hugs Marie

BAH.
THE MOST AWESOME.
EVER.
The best line I've read in the past couple months:
"I will miss you when you go, and I will mourn you when you fall."
It's incredible.

What a fascinating story. And so very true, as much as we all like Draco on the Light side, I don't think that his character would truely allow that. His morals and ideals have been drilled into him since birth and it would take years or more to break nim of them, if it's even possible at all. And Hermione, the smart witch she is, would be the only one to truely understand this, once she actually stops to think about it. This is the most in character DHr story I've seen. *bows to author* Bravo.
~Akire

wow! that was really good.

that was nice... i wonder, do you take requests?

YEP your story is definitely realistic!
i mean Harry Potter encircles the life and thoughts of Harry Potter through the eyes of Harry Potter...if he didn't see Hermione and malfoy together... didn't mean it didn't exist
*wink*

cool story

Oh so good.

good story with the guidelines. x

SHRIEK!

ALLY! This was bloody fantastic! I'm SO PROUD! Wonderful, my darling. Even though I didn't get to beta it...

Erm, you could have shot it my way before you posted here..

Grin, ANYWAY! Lovely my sweet.

You are SO GREAT at tragedy and unrequented love. Your Draco is always so intenese and feels things so incredibly deeply and Hermione matches him step for step, heart-beat for heart-beat.

It was wonderful and I think you did a bang up job!

Congrats, my darling. I KNOW everyone will love this and I'd say this is pretty awesome for 2 hours worth of work. I wish too that you'd had a little more time to flesh it out. I would have liked to know a bit more about what happened...

Nevertheless, you CAN consider doing an epiloge chappie to this. Just a thought.

Love you.

L

the ending was sad.. but i guess its just how things are.

oh i loved it ! it leaves me hoping to see more, but i know there wont be :[ its great good job.

Such intense emotions. I just love it!

Intense and darkly captivating. I really liked this piece; both of them were definately in character (which is a rare thing to see in a fic).
Brava,
-Candy