So sad and wonderfull, I like it so much! It is just the seconde time I read it today ^.^

I love this! It's just the right pace for the angsty ending, and you didn't fall into the trap of overdramatics. Well done! But personally I think it's begging for a sequal.

don't die T_T i'd love to see this continued, there needs to be more gen/rai!!

Awe, poor Genma.

Now that was awfully good, yet awfully cruel too! But I loved every part of it anyway, even if you made me cry, damn you.

It would be nice if he lived, but I don't think that would do the story justice. If you do write a sequel, I think it should be from Raido's point of view, after Genma's dead. Anyway, this was a beautyful fic, in a sad sort of way. Poor Genma.

HOLY FUCKING CRAP! thats so not cool! so sad...poor genma...

That was so evil! Write a sequel, your stories are wonderful!

ah SOO SAD

WAII! You're pure evil! UPdate that! Ohmygosh!! Gen-gen-tan!! This is so good! The anguish! Poor Genma! Please! Please! Update that!

so good. going to go read part 2 now.

wind to thy wings!

~SW

I love this little piece of writing, it's so sad yet so beatifully written *weeps* I almost hope you'll make a sequel, or follow-up chapter of sorts, maybe describing his funeral(if he dies that is)? But I think it stands perfectly well on its own so I understand if you just let it be *adds to story alert to be safe* ^_^

Hi! This is great! You should write a sequel. I rarely read such a good story.

This was very good. *Smiles sweetly* NOW PLEASE UPDATE!!

That was great ! Poor Genma ! I hope you won't let him die, will you ? Thanks for sharing