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jquackers 6/12/10 . chapter 1
I love how Shego just immediately speaks up to comfort Kim

LOL. "Yuck, mushy stuff!" XD I find it CUTE how Kim still blushes so easily, even after five years.

AWESOME minivan! Of course, there has to be green flames. LOL.

I love how Kasy and Sheki are basically opposites. It's adorable.

"Kasy, not wanting to waist time with her hair..." It should be "waste."

I like the reference to the Wizard of Oz.

"...that many of the twins wilder adventures..." Since "twins" is plural and possessive, you should have an apostrophe after the s: twins'

LOL. Dumb skills. -facepalm- That IS Ron-ness right there.

The end felt slightly (just a teeeeny tiny bit) rushed. But maybe that's only because Shego didn't make a short appearance.

Love it.
Ch1ld0fDisturbia 1/1/10 . chapter 1
i love the whole small possibilites (sorry if i spelled it wrong)series i thinck you should right some more sequals(again sory about the spelling)
Sailor Nibaru 6/25/09 . chapter 1
Aw, what a cute little oneshot _ Nice interlude, very cute, great job as always ).
The-Jaron 2/6/08 . chapter 1
aww sweet

JARON OUT
Rain Addict CM 1/26/08 . chapter 1
that was sweet_

Smells like Rain...
minako366 4/29/07 . chapter 1
*is in a sugar-coma*
Alexander - Godslayer 3/11/07 . chapter 1
Now THIS is what I needed, more of my favourite OCs EVER.

Somehow it seems like they are like I imagined them (Probably because of the fanarts I've seen of them). Kasy being more simple and hyperactive and Sheki being quiter, smarter and a bit sinester.

I don't really know what else to say but I'm sure these twins will have a lot of adventures someday.

Pleaes keep up the good job, I really love it!
Spikesagitta 11/20/06 . chapter 1
maybe you can do more of the possible family outing? cos they're just so cute!
Catrlgirl 10/3/06 . chapter 1
The entire Small possibilities series rocks and is rightously well written hope you continue and read my KP fic and my full metal alchemist
Etherelemental 8/18/06 . chapter 1
That was good. As well as the banter with Kim and Shego about Kim liking the color green. It was amusing. And yeah, this entire fic was pretty sweet. Although, I also liked the part about Shego's remark with Kim enjoying laying in the sun as well. Just real good. _
Lisa 8/14/06 . chapter 1
omg so cute!
dartblade 8/6/06 . chapter 1
lol cute man really cute love it keep up the good work and update soon
YakkoWarner 8/2/06 . chapter 1
I have really enjoyed reading your fanfic series set in the "Small Possibilities" universe. You have captured the characters' voices perfectly. The stories themselves are tight and flow well, and I think you do a fine job of walking the line between a more mature theme and a great story that the whole family can enjoy. Thank you for introducing me to this little section of the Kimmiverse. I await the conclusion of "Sidekick" with cheerful impatience.
BioDragon 7/9/06 . chapter 1
Cute, nice job.
The Epyon Avenger 6/29/06 . chapter 1
An adorable piece! Glad for the little intermission from the epic series. :chuckles: Anyway, very cute, I especially like the characterization of the children. Can't wait to read more. _
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