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| Astrid 2006-01-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery original and refreshing. You merged the two elements of G,C and Egypt together wonderfully. Fabulous detail, making it all the more interesting. It's great to read something I actually feel I have learned something from. It'd be nice if you carried it further and wrote about NY. I'd like to read more from you. Great job! |
| Lena 2006-01-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseyeah, like this ;) you should go on... please, write another chapter. the trip to new york would be so great! |
| Jenni 2006-01-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved this! |
| Drusilla Braun 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseYou should do another one. For that brochure. That be great. I really loved this. |
| janekle 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseI've always been a bit of an Egytology fan and try to keep up with all the archeology going on at present so I really enjoyed this story. It never occured to me to join two of my favourite hobbies this way. Congratulations! It really worked for me and your attention to the details of the Saqqara period is impressive to say the least. I also found your Grissom and Catherine characterisations very well done too. Thanks for a great read |