OMG I love your Legend story!! PLEASE make more!!? >.<

Your fan,

~Loveless_Ninja

This is pretty interesting.

*imitating Jack* Darkness! I'm gonna kill Darkness! I'm gonna strangle him! And then I'm gonna bury him, dig him up, and clone him and kill all his clones! I really loved Legend. I've seen the U.S. version and the director's cut version!

Wow I really like your story its amazing. Keep adding more chapters.

Hmm, I like this so far :)

...for some reason, the Goblin reminds me of Doby from Harry Potter...?

yayzeez! so cute! i go on...
*buh-buh-buh-Buh!*
E, creepy eyes, though good idea hm? ;)

o.O Hm...Good chapter, but now I wanna know what happens next, and you haven't posted chapter 6 yet *pouts* ^_^ Is there any chance that Coal and Diamond are going to meet each other in the next chapter? Until next time...

Who will prevail? The Crimson Princess; that's who!

:D YES! You updated! I thought you abandon the story. :( But not to worry, cause I know exactly what your going through with college and life. :P I too haven't updated my stories in...let's see...a year! O-O

but apart from that, I'm happy this story wasn't forgot. :D Fantastic chapter. I like Goblin. :D

Coal's great! I like her character a lot. Nice chapter, Trish. I can't wait for more!

I like it so far :)

^_^ Loved the chapter...sorry it took so long to review. Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter ^_^

fairy holy ground = double threat of all things evil...nicly played..*he says as if an evil twin of himself is pling chess* I like that chapter...and if you kill off Gump...I will never let you sleep again...

backtrack 1: scrying: the art of seeing past, present, or future using a medium of some sort (i.e. water, mirror, smoke, fire, etc.) obtaing a state of "trance" with the use of an inhibitor (i.e. incence, burning herbs etc.) in order to see symbols...but not specific places or things...however..as far as story wise...very nicly done...

backtrack 2: spellcasting: the art and sometimes exact science of concentrating of a specific person in order to obtain greatest efect. also using mediums (i.e. fire, dolls, candles, ropes etc.) one can alter the casting method in order to use scying as a casting method in its self...nicely done on that one...however knowing ways and diffrences in casting and weaving, you could come up with much more (story wise) dramatic spells

sorry for the mile long review...I just thought I needed to say somthing about it...but over all it is becomein one of my favorite fics of yours...I love you, and keep this story UPDATED

I like the petrification...and the quest...it is like d&d all over again