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gsr-fan-36
2008-02-06
ch 1,
abuseaw this is reli cute
liked it
Skoteinos Metamfiezomai
2008-01-13
ch 1,
abuseThat was ridiculously heartwarming. I love it!

~IGC t DM
VaveAma92
2007-04-23
ch 1,
abuseThat was...interesting. But in a good way. I read, I liked it.:-) I think my favorite line is "Go away. I don't like you anymore." from Sara. I definitely need to see her doing that.:-P Great job.
PurplePopple
2007-01-19
ch 1,
abuseI can't think of anything to say other than seems in character and way to cute for words. I love cute.
thegreatbluespoon
2006-12-12
ch 1,
abuseI have never read a story like this one! I LOVED it! Seriously you are good!
GSRGeeklover
2006-05-03
ch 1,
abuseGreat story! I loved it..:)
MontyPythonFan
2006-04-30
ch 1,
abuseLol, I loved this fic! It was so nice to read a non-smutty GSR. A v.sweet friendship fic. :-D

Jess x
forbesn
2006-04-02
ch 1,
abusei. love. it. -hey, how about if I say that enough will you please make another one for me? What about if I say pretty please?!
Well, I think my favorite part was this:
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"Two hours before shift," he said.

As if Sara’s brain were working at a thousandth of its normal speed, her reply to Grissom’s report on the time took a good 20 seconds. That is a lot if you count it.

Really.

"You’re lying," she mumbled.
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Also, I just love the way you phrase the last part, about them sleeping, and anyone thinking about how [IF] they sleep.
and one more part :
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Sara was still deeply asleep. This gave validity to the assessment her mother had made when she was five. Yes, she can spend two days without sleeping if you gave her something to play with and no bedtime to interrupt her. But, when little Sara’s tank of fuel marked empty, she was going to drop on that bed like a stone and for at least five hours she was going to sleep like a log.
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Hehehe, I love it. Please, keep writing. Wicked, Mint, awesome, everything. I love it.
This goes down as a favorite.
spongebob
2006-02-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseawesome to see you back in the mix of fanfic! cute story, grissom and sara sleeping, who would have thunk it?
elenerm
2006-02-01
ch 1, anon.
abusebwhaha funny thanks
now I know what was supposed to happen in the motel z
Windy City Dreamer
2006-01-31
ch 1,
abuseThat was very sweet and tender. Loved your details and fact that you were right about us never really think about famous people or those we really look up to doing normal stuff like catching a nap. I loved it to bits and I'm not even a huge GSR shipper anymore. And your feedback line was priceless. This is definitely going on my faves list.
Lady Abstraction
2006-01-30
ch 1,
abusehee hee!
that was so incredibly cute and witty!
I never even guessed! that was great!

It seemed so... Grissomish and Sara-ish!

so cute!
gsrbutterfly
2006-01-27
ch 1, anon.
abusevery cute story. Lots of good analogies exept for one. Bats aren't blind, they just can't see in the dark, and being nocternal animals, this poses an obvious problem. That is why they use sonar to find food.
annieb
2006-01-25
ch 1,
abuseI giggled at work. My boss thinks I'm nuts. Thanks alot.
Domo Arigato
2006-01-24
ch 1,
abuseI've been grinning like an idiot in front of my computer screen for the last 10 minutes and I have to thank you for that. It's really an art to be able to turn the most anodyne thing into an interesting and compelling story.
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