meows, there's different things going on but i have a feeling that they are connected. Tis very good so far, keep going

and you're back again! *runs and hugs* yaaaay! and with another awesome chapter! yay you! do we get to learn more 'bout this charles dude now? me no likes him...he creeps me...*grrs at bad guy*

Hey,

I just finished reading what you have posted of your story "New Beginnings" and I have to say it is very good. You both are talented writers. You kept me hooked throughout the storie. Keep writing.

oooh, intriguing... poor skittery. :( but i'm so glad you guys updated this! :D i was beginning to wonder... anyway, sorry this is so short, but i have to leave for class in five minutes and i still have yet to finish the processed, nutritionally deficient mass of calories i call my lunch. mmm, campus food. :)

you're back! i thought you two were gone forever! lost in the oblivion! eaten by rabid weasles! kidnapped by maniac-alright...so maybe i'm going a little overboard...but...i cannae help myself...hehe. ANNNyyyhewwww,

YAAAAAAAAAYYYY MORE STORY! awww skitts, don't be such a downhearted meanie...we love you, really, we do! (i've consumed quite a bit of sugar lately, fyi...hehe). well, i am trying ta be serious, dontchaknow. this was SUCH an awesome installment! i totally loved it! it's so very skittery; i loved seeing into his thoughts and how he reacted with all this stuff...i just find skittery one of the most intriguing characters and you're doing so very well with him. MARSHMALLOWS!

eeek! I like this story! you write good cliffhangers and I can't wait to see where you're going with it. Yay love triangles!

aww, what a fantastic story. it's cool that you have all these different sub-plots, and i really like how your characters are well-developed. i think i'm especially partial to estha. i have to know what happens next! write more, please!

aww, it's okay. i've moved, i know what it's like. it's totally great that you're back and there's more to this awesome story! ooooooh and what a chapter to come back with! bravo, bravo! such suspense! gahhh! *waves to you and christi* hi! hehe...sorry...sinus medicine. anyhew, YEY GREAT CHAPTER!

awww don't feel alone! i'm sorry that i didn't review sooner! i was on vacation for like the first half of july, and i've been soooo behind in reading fics that i don't notice when stories get updated! sorry! can i still have a hershey kiss? woohoo i loved this chapter! it captured skittery perfectly! he's so pessimistic it's almost funny the way he reacts to christi. can't wait to see more of this!

WOOHOO! PIG OUT! AND WOOOOHOOOO! FINALLY WE GET AN UPDATE TO THIS STORY! *munches on the fudge* hmm. cool chapter. i don't like sarah, though. but hey, it's all still cool! i really like how you tell us what the newsies have been doing with the jacobs recently, how they're like one huge family. that's really awesome. well, on to the next chapter!

I am really enjoying this. It's a great story...keep up the great work. I would like to see Jack dump Sarah and go with Estha... she's so much nicer. You're making me hungry with all of your little foot notes.. ha ha ha... well, I'll be back to check for more. You have me interested. Letoile

*takes a hershey kiss* I just found the story and I am wondering how much longer till we find out some stuff. Like who got Estha pregnant and who Christi was runnign from. That sort of stuff. Keep up the good work, even if I won't see it for a couple of weeks.

Oooooh. We've been gone a long time. Blame Natz. It's all her fault. *Takes out Jafar snake can and hypnotizes everyone.* It's allll Naaaatz faaaault, it's alllll Naaaatz faaaaault. *Winces* Don't beat me up, Nat! Anywho. More is coming very soon. Guess what you guys? I just found this out... yeah, my character's name is Christi, and my name is Christi, too. Duh, some girl wrote me an email telling me that. Like I didn't know. *Shakes head.* Peace, ya'll. Sorry for the wait.

oooh. i like! this is awesoe, but there are so many un answered questions! Write more soon, and i love peanut brittle!

Wow. We're good. That's all I can say!