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| Sakura22222 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseOMG! She raped him! |
| Ravenbird 2007-07-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! That was totally awesome and of course very well written. I'm glad you decided to write it. *sigh* Mical...:) |
| Darth Phex 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abusewow! SCARY! (but very Descriptive and well written) RUN DISCIPLE, RUN!! plz update ^_^ |
| DarthNexus9000 2006-01-25 ch 1, | abusegood story...you seem kinda crazy, but that is okay |
| Dante-Raven 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseThis was well scripted and paced. I enjoy the darkness about it--much more subtle and tempting, almost as if it were nothing more than a whisper in the air to the characters, especially where the Exile is concerned. I find it all the more intriguing that you chose to describe a childlike innocence in the Disciple and you make a heavy change in Atton and the Exile's relationship, becoming nothing more than just pleasures of flesh. I really liked this--it carried a dark theme well, and you characterized an exceptionally bitter Exile. And believe me, Santa IS out to get us all! |
| Hiita-hime 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseOuch... that was painful to read, not because of the writing, (which was bloody fantastic!) but the Disciple being commanded like that! Sheesh, I love the guy to pieces and a Dark Side Exile gets to sleep with him?! :O THERE IS NO JUSTICE IN THIS WORLD! *sob sob* Keep up the brilliant writing, because, lets face it, you're a master of oneshots, and I hope to see another soon! ^_^ Adrieal Kenobi x x x Obvious Advertisement: Take a look at my KOTOR stories, if you want. They don't meet up with your standards, but hey, they're interesting! ^_^ |
| Dark Lord Daishi 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseExcellent job! i like your seductress DSF exile! is there going to to be more? if so, update soon! |
| Ewanlover64 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseWow...just...wow. I must say, I honestly don't know about this fic. But...it is extremely well-written. Anyway, it's very...interesting. Hah...I'm speechless. Good job. ...wow. |