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Reviews For: In My Corruption

Sakura22222
2008-05-28
ch 1,
abuseOMG! She raped him!
Ravenbird
2007-07-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow! That was totally awesome and of course very well written. I'm glad you decided to write it. *sigh* Mical...:)
Darth Phex
2006-02-14
ch 1,
abusewow! SCARY! (but very Descriptive and well written)
RUN DISCIPLE, RUN!! plz update ^_^
DarthNexus9000
2006-01-25
ch 1,
abusegood story...you seem kinda crazy, but that is okay
Dante-Raven
2006-01-24
ch 1,
abuseThis was well scripted and paced. I enjoy the darkness about it--much more subtle and tempting, almost as if it were nothing more than a whisper in the air to the characters, especially where the Exile is concerned. I find it all the more intriguing that you chose to describe a childlike innocence in the Disciple and you make a heavy change in Atton and the Exile's relationship, becoming nothing more than just pleasures of flesh. I really liked this--it carried a dark theme well, and you characterized an exceptionally bitter Exile. And believe me, Santa IS out to get us all!
Hiita-hime
2006-01-24
ch 1,
abuseOuch... that was painful to read, not because of the writing, (which was bloody fantastic!) but the Disciple being commanded like that! Sheesh, I love the guy to pieces and a Dark Side Exile gets to sleep with him?! :O THERE IS NO JUSTICE IN THIS WORLD! *sob sob*

Keep up the brilliant writing, because, lets face it, you're a master of oneshots, and I hope to see another soon! ^_^

Adrieal Kenobi x x x
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Dark Lord Daishi
2006-01-23
ch 1,
abuseExcellent job!
i like your seductress DSF exile!
is there going to to be more?
if so, update soon!
Ewanlover64
2006-01-23
ch 1,
abuseWow...just...wow. I must say, I honestly don't know about this fic. But...it is extremely well-written. Anyway, it's very...interesting. Hah...I'm speechless. Good job.

...wow.
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