Aw...its so sad! Ho wdare you! Just kidding! This is a really cute story! Granted that its the one that sticks to the original more than the others youve written! I like it. Mark loves Roger in a brotherly way...its so cute cuz everyone knows his true feelings for Roger yet he tries to hide them...still cute story...

Wow. This is excellent. It reminds me a lot of a story I wrote called The Fate of The Artist.

*dies* that was really good. *runs away and cries*

Elphie Marky, my new favourite writer. This story made me cry. Especially when Roger said "Hold me until..." So sad. But I understand why it won first place.

Keep on with your writing. It's brilliant.

Amber

Wow. This was amazing. Truly, truly amazing. I was in tears at the end, and not just because I'm PMSing bad. That was some amazing writing. The only thing that confused me was that he wasn't in a hospital. I mean, I guess it sort of makes sense. I wouldn't want to spend my last days in one. I'd want to be home. But anyway, this was really great. You're such an incredible writer. I'd like to see you do a chapter fic, mainly because your stories are so good, I really just hate to see them end.

Rock on.

WAH (I'm crying), but I don't know who for...Mark or Roger.

that was so sad! it made me cry!

So sad. *tear*

So, that definitely made me cry. A LOT. Good stuff.

Omg...that made me cry! Roger's my favorite character and that was practically a visual of him dying :(

But it was really beautifully written :) I loved it :)

aw that was so nice

WAH I feel like crying now! Sheesh I'm such a sap. Beautiful fic!

Wow, good job!