This is really interesting I can't wait to see what Kagura will do..although the story would be better if you didn't abuse "**" so much.

aw, i hope kyp gets there in time!

same as last. NO! WANT MORE! please be a happy ending...and soon! i hope theres more, actually, lol XD

wow...emotional and deep and awesome. i personally like larger paragrapghs, but these are well-written and they also portray his feelings well while still giving us needed info. i hope this is a happy ending sort of story...

i liked it

WAH! poor kagura!! poor kyo!! i cant wait to c wat happens next!! pls update soon!

And the drama rolls on ... I'm looking forward to the third chapter more than I can say. Keep up the the great work and I'll definitely be back! Fantastic work!

You already know that I love your work so the fact that this is another of my favorites probably comes as no surprise. You have such a grasp for dramatic tension all the way through the chapter. Excellent, excellent job with this new fic.