Excellent chapter! Genuine violence and danger is just what that show needs. And I like all your mentions to previous episodes.

Brock's reaction in the show now has a fitting origin. Good job on that.

I love how Ivy went out of her way to describe Team Rocket. ...a group on a perpetual failing streak; a group so incompetent that a place in my organization would only improve them...

The plan was to read at least three or four chapters before reviewing, but the ideas you put into the fanfic so far are pretty interesting!

The plot adds a new layer to everything that happened in the cartoon (even drawing from some minor details, like the vileploom) without manipulating any canon. And Professor Ivy, rather than turning out to be a power-hungry sadist, has a much more peace-oriented plan to seize power that actually fits into her character.

Not bad so far. I look forward to finishing this.

I knew ivy was eveil

Awesome story. Not only did you find a way to connect all the events in the Orange League together, but you kept me fascinated from beginning to end. I LOVED Professor Ivy as a villain, I'm just so fascinated with beautiful women as villains. I loved how you developed her plan and how she hoped to rule the world. Plus, you gave her a nephew in Tracey and a daughter in Lorelei. This was really good.

Hm... not so good.

"'...the Jenny of Mandarin Island, traced an emergency phone call she received earlier today... she sent out an emergency call for all local police to investigate the area...'"

That's way inconsistent with what happened and forms a serious hole in your plot. The emergency call was only seconds ago.

Apart from that, it's a nice ending, but not as spectacular as the beginning.

BTW, for readers' benefit, Team Rocket Rose has posted some author's notes on this story at the Pokemon Tower.

Story's progressing well. You've got me intrigued how this will end. Using Meowth and the diary was an excellent way of expounding the plot.

As I said in my review from TPT, the prologue is superb! Ivy IMO comes across as a loony who would try and pull something like this off. It's very neat how you've pulled threads from the various episodes and woven them together into your own plot. Seriously, you should get back into writing!

The closing paragraphs are phenomenal. "It was a simple concept, really"-that just cracked me up.

A point: You describe the three kids as "geeky" but contrast that with their being "hackers". Being a geek is closely related to being a hacker. They are not opposites.

A great story with lots of clever episode references and some nice character development from Team Rocket. Your imagery is easy to visualize and the story is a quick, easy to entice read.

Had to stop my read and give a special shout-out for this chapter - Ash and friends walking on-scene so completely clueless was priceless! James' contingency plan was a great laugh as well!

Holy -! Wow, and I thought the Secret of MissingNO was a great TR story! I have seen the light, TRRose! *falls down and kisses the ground you walk on* All hail Team Rocket and Team Rocket Rose!

Wow, that was a awsome story, I hope you make a sequal

Hey, TTR! It's Esther, the one who sent you that thing about Mewtwo Returns (How Ash and Gio didn't seem to recongnize each other.). This is one of the best stories I've read! GO TTR! _
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Princess Esther of Hyrule (aka Cassandra)

This is a really good fic. I got here from your site; it rocks! Anyway, I really enjoyed it. I can just see Professor Ivy being this odd. It does answer some unsolved mysteries. Anyway... is there going to be a sequel?

best. fic. ever.