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| Raichu 2006-07-14 ch 8,  | abuseHm... not so good. "'...the Jenny of Mandarin Island, traced an emergency phone call she received earlier today... she sent out an emergency call for all local police to investigate the area...'" That's way inconsistent with what happened and forms a serious hole in your plot. The emergency call was only seconds ago. Apart from that, it's a nice ending, but not as spectacular as the beginning. BTW, for readers' benefit, Team Rocket Rose has posted some author's notes on this story at the Pokemon Tower. |
| Raichu 2006-07-14 ch 3, | abuseStory's progressing well. You've got me intrigued how this will end. Using Meowth and the diary was an excellent way of expounding the plot. |
| Raichu 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseAs I said in my review from TPT, the prologue is superb! Ivy IMO comes across as a loony who would try and pull something like this off. It's very neat how you've pulled threads from the various episodes and woven them together into your own plot. Seriously, you should get back into writing! The closing paragraphs are phenomenal. "It was a simple concept, really"--that just cracked me up. A point: You describe the three kids as "geeky" but contrast that with their being "hackers". Being a geek is closely related to being a hacker. They are not opposites. |
| Tylec Asroc 2005-04-04 ch 9, | abuseA great story with lots of clever episode references and some nice character development from Team Rocket. Your imagery is easy to visualize and the story is a quick, easy to entice read. |
| Tylec Asroc 2005-04-04 ch 5, | abuseHad to stop my read and give a special shout-out for this chapter - Ash and friends walking on-scene so completely clueless was priceless! James' contingency plan was a great laugh as well! |
| ImJessieTR 2005-02-08 ch 9, | abuseHoly -! Wow, and I thought the Secret of MissingNO was a great TR story! I have seen the light, TRRose! *falls down and kisses the ground you walk on* All hail Team Rocket and Team Rocket Rose! |
| Bird1111 2004-04-30 ch 9, | abuseWow, that was a awsome story, I hope you make a sequal |
| Princess Esther of Hyrule 2004-01-28 ch 1, | abuseHey, TTR! It's Esther, the one who sent you that thing about Mewtwo Returns (How Ash and Gio didn't seem to recongnize each other.). This is one of the best stories I've read! GO TTR!! ^_^ Please read and review my stories! Princess Esther of Hyrule (aka Cassandra) |
| sammi-san 2004-01-25 ch 9, | abuseThis is a really good fic. I got here from your site; it rocks! Anyway, I really enjoyed it. I can just see Professor Ivy being this odd. It does answer some unsolved mysteries. Anyway... is there going to be a sequel? |
| Nukkus 2002-08-06 ch 9, anon. | abusebest. fic. ever. |
| SeraScribe 2002-05-11 ch 9, | abuseIt so kept me in suspense...great to see Meowth being the hero for a change (yay!) and who'd of thought Tracey was related to Professor Ivy...ha ha. A bit too much Brock cruelty though...oh well, it's all part of the story! |
| WizardWYDS 2002-03-22 ch 9, | abuseThe RacerX SALUTE. |
| WizardWYDS 2002-03-22 ch 8, | abuseThe RacerX SALUTE. |
| RocketBratt 2002-01-15 ch 9, anon. | abuseThat was an awesome story! Are you going to sequel it! I really hope so! Please do! |
| TRLgirl 2002-01-14 ch 9, anon. | abuseLoved it..... Read it.... its really good Sequel? |