...hi? lol, I really shouldn't even be on now, considering I have a huge ochem test in a few hours that i haven't finished studying for...but this is more fun. :D YAY UPDATE! :D I love it! We finally know what the big plan is...and I have to say I wasn't expecting anything like that...actually I never really had an idea of what to expect. :) Hehee, these next few chapters are really going to start things rolling; I can't wait!

Well, at last we find out his plans. Nothing like a breaking and entering.

Glad you are writing again!

I just found this story. I like the idea and the plot. I hope that you update soon

Still looking awesome...no complaints. Nice use of George's loopholes to add to your story.

Keep on keepin' on!
Reinnos

Just came across your work. I enjoy it very much. Nice to see things from a different perspective. What did happen to all of the jedi who escaped. There must have been some.

YAY! WE! WOOHOO! anything else? Oh, yeah. FINALLY! :D hehe, had to throw that one in. I love it! You threw in just enough clues to keep us going, and getting deeper and deeper. :D Lovely! The development, the dp reference, the descriptions, the dp reference...:D Keep up the great work!

hey kid! figured it was finally time to start reading some of your stories, and to tell you the truth, i be impressified!

this is really good (i have a bit of a soft spot for Star Wars, but thats not the point).

i really like this idea...have even pondered it myself :D anyway, really enjoying the way it's playing out. really want to know how Rayn is such a "jedi-esque" individual...and what is connection with Melina...cause i know there is one *wink wink*

only complaint is that the names of ships are italicized, but that's just me being anal.

keep up the good work!
Your loving Reinnos

o.O... you BETTER update lol... ^^ i love this story so far... the chaps are just a little on the short side

Finally you updated! Good chap, and nice job on the emotion portrayal!

Don't make us wait so long again. This story has a good premise, but it's moving pretty slow. Pick up the pace.

Hehe! Shameless advertising! But i loved it! Rayn is so much more mysterious now, what the heck is up with him? Hmm...hehe, I'm loving it! Descriptions and sentence stuff is getting a WHOLE lot better. Congrats!

Hah, your comment about not reviewing being rude lured me in. ;)

It's an interesting idea; I "Jedi survivor" stories so I'll keep an eye on it. Your chapters are a little short, but sometimes it takes awhile to get into the flow.

Cool narrator from what I can see, too.

That was an awesome story! Keep writing more stories!

i liked it but you should start to make longer chapters ^^ and update soon.

Aww, you rock dear! Thanks for the ad's. :D And I loved the clone trooper part--I hadn't expected them to figure out that they messed up. And Rayn--awesomeness! You added a lot to his character in one short chapter, lovely! Keep up the awesomeness!