OK I just finish chapter 30 and I havta say Wow. I loved the game and honestly i think the personalities you made match them to a T. I love your writing style and your dirty joke XD. Keep it up you are now one of my fav authors.

...Wow. Simply delightful. I've been reading this entire series for the last two days, and I simply can't get enough of it. I also must have read 'Just the Two of Us' enough times to memorize it. All of the characterizations you've made of them are fantastic and much more interesting that some of what I've read. You've left nothing out that I could ask ask for, aside from the fact you haven't finished. By all means, make sure it goes on for days and days, but don't leave me hangin'.

HA HA!! Great Chapter to a long vacation! Disappearing for months straight huh? Ah well, your dedicated readers are still behind you. Like always, You keep writing we'll keep reading. Good Shit Noh, Keep it goin'

JOSH!!

I found your profile. :)

Your little sis,

Kristen

Oh my god you finally updated! I was gettin kinda scared, lol. And Omg I'm mentioned in the AN!! ((Squee)) In a weird way, I'm happy that I'm officially the owner of the longest review you've had. ^.^ That's so cool.

I never, EVER fathomed the idea of one of the GGs being Mexican, so that was a pleasent surprise. Variety is great. Since I'm on this topic, where's Garam from? Just curious, cause I don't remember you mentioning that...You probably have though.

Of course, practically all the questions that pop up from this chapter you have pointed out will be answered in the next chapter, so I won't bother asking them. Lol.

Ouch. That crash made me hurt. o.o It SOUNDED painful, and imagery didn't do much to change that. It's great though. Feeling the character's pain is part of what a fanfic is about! ~.^ Poor Jazz. I feel so sorry for her. And Corn doesn't even know! He's so clueless right now as to what's really bothering her.

Anywho, I can't wait for the next chapter! Maybe you can get some sort of rythm going on now, ne? ((cheers for idea)) Hehe. Ja ne, till then. ^.^

~Kazuki~

Ok, to start things off, I've been reading this for about a week now and I am soorry for not reviewing for every chapter! It's just my thing though: I can't review until I've caught up! But, before I get into the real review, I just wanna let you know that this is one of the BEST things I have ever read! I was hooked ever since I read McDonalds! (I know you don't like it, but be glad! It made me addicted! xD) It's like a daily fix of JSRF, since my Xbox needed maintence, which actually has a good side-effect. If it hadn't messed up, I wouldn't be reviewing this! All the time I play JSRF and think about writing a fanfic on it, but I always thought "Nah, no one does that!" Then I remembered that there was a category for it on which led me to this and Vinyl Umbrella! So that, I can be grateful for. You're an amazing writer, and the only one who can keep me reading until absurd hours in the morning! I love it! -glomps- Now, since I've been rambling about stuff, I will get to the actual review!
First of all, the characters: You have officially made me like Combo and Corn. It's not like I hated them at first, it's just I never really paid attention to them, ya know? Thanks to you, I see them in a different light (Maybe blue-ish? xD)and gawd you nearly made me cry during that little Corn fiasco! Dx -cough- Anyways...YoYo is so adorable! It makes me just wanna hug him! He was always one of my favorites and I really, really enjoyed the way you wrote him. There is one person that you haven't really shown anything about though. Soda. Lol. It's like he's only there for the sake of being there, ya know? Almost everyone has a chapter in which they have a major part, and then there's Soda. xD There may be someone else I'm forgetting, but right now it's only Soda.
Second, Genre: You have no IDEA how many times I've laughed while reading this! You have a special way of making even the small things seem funny! I even caught a few laughing spells during the Swing Blade series, even though I don't think Humor was the main genre. XD You did an excellent job on getting the overall feel for each chapter/series across. I've never read anything like it.
Third: Cronological is boring. ^.^ I really like the fluctuating thing with the date and times. It made things fun.
Fourth: (This is actually something I pre-typed yesterday, just so you don't get confused.) It is 8:24am and I have not been to sleep yet. Instead, I was reading the fanfic until I finally got to chapter 26. I made a list of what I found wrong (keeping your little comment about c.c. in mind) and put them on file. It doesn’t start at chap. 1, since you didn’t mention it since super-later. If ya want, I’ll make a note about going through all the chaps. Hell, I’ll even put it on a post it note. Lol. Anyways, around Ch. 19, I started taking more notice about the mistakes, but I don't really find a lot. Just little spelling/grammar mistakes and maybe a few missed words here or there. Nothing really big, but you did say to give a critique, right? Oh, but in Great Day Side B there is something I did notice. There’s a rule that someone taught me. My Lit. Teacher I think. Don’t use the same word to start off a sentence more than 2 times in a paragraph. I don't think it's mandatory though. It just flickered in my mind when reading that chapter. Just something I wanted to throw in there…
Extra things: Your original ideas for Swing Blades were cool. Maybe you should make a little spinoff thing using it, ya know? There was something else I was gonna say...oh! Do you plan on doing something for a Valentines thing? That would be incredibly hilarious. GG Valentines Day. It would cause so much trouble! XD
OKAY since I've left a long enough review I will end it here. ^.^ I can't wait to read more, so update soon kay?
P.S: Omg you haven’t updated since August?! I feel so…BEHIND!! DX Gah!

I love how individual these chapters are.

-GCOE

All three were great. XDD

-GCOE

* Sniffle... * Noh..man, this chapter. Brought a nice lil tear to meh eye. The feeling of being a friend, than a self-serving...person ya know. She loves that boy, we all know. But in the end, the greater good was for her to sacrifice herself for his happiness...ENOUGH WITH THE ACTING! Ok, great chapter. Kept the feeling all the way thru the end. Put me in a poetry writing mood. And about the delayed updates, We all have lives. So really, there isn't much to apologize for. But, either way. Keep it up. Bomb ass writing.

I really like the way you portray Corn and the ganag, is like they come to life through your writing. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. :P (btw, if you're an anime watcher, I recommend you watch "Air Gear" its kinda like JSRF but a little more complex)

YAY, I love happy endings. This story of adventures and misadventures is so almost perfection. All it needs is a chapter on Soda, someone getting a hooker, and spontanious breakdancing. Also, "black Mr. Clean" = I lol'd for about 6 minutes. You are the master of funny.

I also gotta say, good job shouting out to Bagatelle and all the other fanfic writers over here. We need more love in the JGR section.

I adored this. And I'm so happy that you used my ideas! It was particularly satisfying to me because I got all of my questions answered.

I really loved seeing Yoyo get stronger. Most of the time he's portrayed as a huge baby who can't do anything, but he grew a lot in the last three chapters, and that was a nice change, for me. Also, it was nice to see Gum really caring about seeing him happy. All in all, it was really heartwarming and just a great read in general. Can't wait to see the next series, and also, I'm looking forward to seeing if you bring Gum's feelings back into play later on in the game.

Thanks for the plug, too XD Keep up the good work, Noh!

YAY an update!And YAY you responded to my review, now I feel special. You know I wasn't going to use that name cuz I didn't want it to seem like I was copying yours but I've been using it for three years now as I have a love of noh masks and would collect them if they weren't so damn expensive. Gum seems to be very...popular...with everyone. As for "Monster Island" as long as you don't just give up on it, which would make me cry *Feel the pressure* I can be very patient. And I don't know why but when I read that whole Ghandi-Fuck part the song "Spottieottiedopaliscious" by Outkast played in my head...Damn, damn, damn Jaamees.

Is it weird that I've read this chapter like ten times in the past hour? I just started reading your story yesterday and I love it, you're a great writer and very funny. It's like JSR with Boondocks comedy, I knew you were a brotha hehe. By the way you have acutally made me like Poison Jam, Ghidorah is awesome and alot nicer and more intelligent than I thought a PJ would be, he's my favorite and just might replace the Noise Tanks on my list. I can't wait to read "Monster Island". Also, you have excellent taste in music.

Okay. So you sent me what you'd written so far for chapter 29, and I was like, "shit, I should probably read chapters 27 and 28 first..." so I came back to read these, and I think I'm gonna have to say that this is my favorite "series" so far.

I actually cried during Gum's speech after she slapped Yoyo. Really. I did. It was very touching. And the way that he was so reluctant to even THINK of having sex with her was very sweet.

Also I LAUGHED SO HARD AT THE GANDHI PART OH MY GOD

So congratulations, you've made me both laugh and cry in one chapter. XDD Ahh. Okay, now, I'll see what you sent me and get back to you ASAP. Loving this, Noh, simply loving it.